Sweet, and humorous with the little bits that allude to the fact there is never any fourth wall. Nicely done.

If there was an official anime series of disgaea 2 with the dancing scene just like this one that would be amazing

When these two are together nothing can stop them. They could overthrow the ranked 1 badass of the disgaea series if they wanted to or if they already hold that title.

Aw!

Heh, this makes me feel like listening to Sinful Rose, a cute tale involving Disgaea premier couple!

hmm... so, Adell is being affected by Rozy's ability, yet he's also being affected by his heart. beautifully done, i must say.

I enjoyed reading this story very much! x3

Adell and Rozalin definitely need more love~

Aw, so cute!

I agree! I don't think Adell's an idiot either. Hot blooded, but certainly no idiot. The geo panel part in the game proved that much.

Anway, I think this is my favorite fic centered around the dance in the opening. It's been done before, but you did it...special, somehow. You brought more meaning and intimacy into it.

And I thought it was really cool how you brought the game mechanics into the story, like the damage counters and the cut scenes. Very cool.

I think you write quite loverly, and it seems to me like you have an interesting perspective and grasp on Adell and Rozalin, both individually and as a couple. Well done!

Gasp you beat me to it! I was going to do a dance fic, hehe~ because of that awesome scene in the intro. Righto. I better come up with another AdellxRozalin idea, huh?

Anyway, anyway, I loved this! I love the wording and stuff! I think it was really cute but also very insightful and dare I say *deep*? (insert huge gasp here)

Needless to say, great work! *scrambles to think of an idea*