Reviews for Coffee Shop
ah chapter 1 . 5/29
WARNING Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.
Inuki chapter 5 . 5/16
I read this story years ago and loved it. Rereading many of your works again and still love reading them. I love the drama and the human emotions you convey in this story. I hope you continue this version KakaSaku someday so we can find out how their story goes.
aristarchus chapter 5 . 4/18
HAHA I'm not the only one in quarantine that's running back on these fics.

I too was very pleasantly surprised that there were more chapters added to this from when I first read it. This is such a good piece of writing, the mood is set so well and the characters are so well defined. The storyline is going to stick in my head for a long time. So glad to still be able to read your fics.
Sweetpotato16 chapter 1 . 4/8
Ever since the quarantine, I have been finding comfort from reading a ton of fanfic. I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for writing this piece. We readers tend to forget just how much effort and time is being sacrificed to bring forth this quality of work. This appreciation comment is the least I can do to express my gratitude. Thank you dear author for the wonderful read, and keep up the good work! Keep safe always
Clearheart chapter 5 . 3/19
Hi Leafy, I saw a fanart on tumblr recently, which led back to this fic... and I’m so glad! What a fun story. I kind of remember the oneshot version, but not the newer chapters, so it was tremendous fun reading it all again.

There is so much action, and who can resist a double agent Kakashi doing his best to protect a med student Sakura? I love how Akatsuki is portrayed as an organized crime ring, with familar characters causing general mayhem. The large city of Konoha becomes a character too, with all the seedy, grimy danger.

The details of the diner and Sakura's thoughts and feelings are so realistic. You do a wonderful job of bringing it all to life!

I realize the last update was years ago, but the fic has my imagination spinning now. I wonder what Tsunade is like and what Sakura would think after meeting her. Would Sakura crave her ordinary student life again, or would she become the new prodigy and successor to the ANBU organization?

There is a line that teases what Naruto and Sasuke had been up to, which is watching over Sakura at school. That's a whole nother topic begging for exploration. It makes you wonder how they would interact in this AU world.

Ah, and that cliffhanger with Genma. Hopefully he escaped danger!

Anyway, I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed the story again. Thanks for writing and sharing. :)
EmpressNariko chapter 5 . 8/2/2019
Oh damn! What an incredible story! I totally love this! It's fit for a movie! Action, intrigue a nice slice of romance and drama! It's got it all! You're a wonderful author!
JHigg chapter 5 . 7/6/2019
Loved this, wish you'd come back and finish it! Maybe we'll get our wish
Camy581 chapter 5 . 6/20/2019
Ohhh this is such an exciting story! Love it
Loreyu'kz chapter 5 . 4/21/2019
hey, do you intend to finish?
please, continue to write cause i love your histories, and i really want to read more things of you.
yours Kakashi and Sakura are so funny and authentics

please, come back to ffnet

with lov, respect and gratitude
loreyu
mrs.sakura.hatake chapter 5 . 2/15/2019
This chapter is by far my favorite. Watching Kakashi as he realizes he has no control over his emotions with Sakura, or his reactions.

In some ways he is more venerable than she is here. She is scared and lost, but he is experiencing emotions he has pushed down for so long it must be overwhelming.

This has progressed beautifully and if your Muse ever inspires you to come back to it I will be so excited to learn what happens next. If not I have really enjoyed the 5 chapters you have shared with us. Thank you
mrs.sakura.hatake chapter 2 . 2/15/2019
I love when cannonical things are in AU. Tsunade's organization being called ANBU is brilliant.

Also how little Pain says. The creepy quiet vibe he gives off really works. Makes him seems much more dangerous
mrs.sakura.hatake chapter 1 . 2/14/2019
Big tip! Hahahaha

Boss you have no idea. This just jumped to the good part from the start.
Jayuki chapter 4 . 2/14/2019
His flat looks gorgeous the way you described it! And the bathroom to die for xD wish I could be in a place like that once at least! And poor thing they were exhausted, impressed they got that far, if I remember well next chapter should be thrilling again sadly the last D: Thanks for writing this fic leafy ! Sending lots of love
Jayuki chapter 3 . 2/14/2019
The bike scene is so movie and great, she taking the bullet out in his bathroom too xD what I missed and kakashi should have said she might not know tsunade but I'm sure tsunade knows her and loves her, which makes her an easy target, rly kakashi you should know better lol xxx
Jayuki chapter 2 . 2/14/2019
Uii so intense, nothing like a rivalry between mafias. And yes I said last chapter this was your last fic I know it isn't, but was the last one to be updated so first of the list TNOTG and last of the list Coffee Shop xD and yes I read I think everything or at least 90% of your fics, because I love them and your writing
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