Yes! It more than 'flowed'.. ;P... Thank you so very very very much. This was so beautiful :") Please write more like this :3

That was great, really enjoyed this

This was a lovely piece, funny and heartfelt with a satisfying ending. You asked if it flowed... YES,it did! It was a pleasure to read.

Yus

I love this story! It flows naturaly and I was captured by the story development. I loved the seduction and the inevitable escalation! I was only wondering, since only restauration mentioned is Michiru's, if all the dates took place there. I guess Neji would be quite famous for his date escapades there. ;) Thank you for a great NejiTen fanfiction! Youy made my day with this story. :)

Leave it to Hyuuga to make it a command. Love me, he said.

Nice work. :)

What a great read! Nicely paced, good length but well contained, very well thought out, detailed but succinct - a real gem!
Thanks for sharing, friend!

Woooow! Loved it XD

There was a moment I thought the story was nearing its end and neither TenTen nor Neji were going to do anything to get together. In my mind I was telling them "Do something! DO SOMETHING!". I loved the way you made Neji react. You're an amazing writer and I was very glad to receive the email alerts from your other works. I'm happy you've come back to FF :-)

Sweet story. I loved it.

It flowed. :D And it was amazing.

Awwwww, you had my rapt attention with this! It was bittersweet and hilarious and romantic - I kept wondering when/how they were going to get kicked out of the restaurants (and how much Neji must've spent on all those dates)... Loved the build-up of suspense/tension between Neji and Tenten... Would have loved for it to continue, but the story ends well where it does... (Especially when Neji asked Tenten to love him.. it is painful and in-character to me :) )

Yes, the story did flow very well, and I'm sorry to see that there's no more to it! :( Love your writing style too, and all the emotions that flew between them. Thank you for writing and sharing! I think you made my day. :)

Lol u should do another chapter where they akwadly tell their dates that they would never be and have tenten be conscious about them while Neji doesn't give a damn

Wooh, u go neji. I love this, especially the seduction

That was perfect. It's really unusual for me to read such good Nejiten fiction. Hope you have more! :D