Hey Soph! See, I promised! XD This is awesome, and so are fried bananas! _ Great job!

uh... he better mean him:)

Ah! That ending line was priceless! There is so much wih Tony that's in between the lines. And you captured that perfectly! Also, I KNEW I didn't like Ray. Half of me was like 'kick his ass, Tony!' lol.

Alivia

hey you.

so i haven't been reading a lot of (any, actually...) ncis fictions lately, except for the occasional one of yours. i'm definitely glad i took the time to read this one in a timely fashion though. cause it was DAMN GOOD. great, in fact.

no, really. it was. and don''t you go thinking that i'm just saying that cause we're tight... it was REALLY FREAKING GOOD! so yeah, i'm done now. kbye. and come back from your very mini hiatus asap!

Hola! Just wanted to let you know I'm still reading! :)

Good one!

Aw I'm in love with how adorable your writing is! And I continue to love everyone of your stories! I liked how you had Ziva all mad at the start and then she goes soft and cries in Tony's presence. I have a feeling Ray is doing something hinky with Eli, I would love for this scene to actually happen :D

Danni

:') awww

Oh, that was so cute! Sad, but cute. Your writing is amazing!

I liked it it is good

It's a great fic per usual honey! ) I hope Tony is that mannnn 333 She has feelings too! She is human! She deserves better. She does. I wonder if you'll be foreshadowing the next season? ;) Time will tell! 3~~

So sweet together and yeah I hope Ziva does find out Ray's still lying to her.

PERFECT! tehe awesome job with this:)

Good story.

It left me a little sad though, for the both of them.

Why can't they ever just be open and honest with each other?

sigh...

I hope Tony gets to smack Ray in the nose someday.

Good, good story.

Very well written, you nailed Ziva's characterization after everything she is scared of people using and abusing her like Ari did and Michael.

I hope Ray's not working with Eli though. If anything I want them as enemies.

*tackles!*

You are so super-epic-awesome-PURPLE.

Everything about this is wonderful.

Ziva is so REAL, I could feel her emotions through the screen.

And Tony, so strong-a wall for her to lean on .

This was great.

And I assure you, the *tackle* was in pure ADORATION .