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5hat was yummy

I couldn't remember why this was in my favorites. Now I remember.

This was an amazing story other than the part where Naruko tugs on his cock causing pain. That was messed up and not something someone who loves you should ever do, if they do, indeed care about you. Kinda messed up, that is. At least when they aren't in a BDSM relationship.

Fuck you asshole. Your pairings make no fucking sense. It seems like you were high and sucking cock. Just because your mother was a two-dollar cumslut doesn't mean you can write bullshit and expect it to float.

I don't think we needed to know, or care, about other pairings unless you're going focus on them. Which you obviously didn't.

That's what I get for reading an incest fic, I guess. Too many stupid shit to handle.

This was fucking fire

Thia story doesn't make sense. Lemons are cool but everything else kinda sucks.

Namikaze's Rebirth! Can u make a sequel

What... The... Fuck. "I know a jutsu therefore we're family!" ... Just no.

...And then they had kids. And then since there was no rule against it in the Uzumaki clan, Rin also got preggers. And then Tsunade and Shizune also joined in, seeing as it was there last chance. Tsunade really wanted to revitalize the Senju, and Rin wasn't going near porn stache Kakashi with a ten foot pole. But she'd heard every night how much Naruto's pole made girls happy. So she was in. The role play was off the charts.

A couple years later, when Gaara visited Konoha, Hinata saw the big family that Naruto had, and she felt really really bad. That could have been her. Gaara, being the total bro that he was, never consumated his marriage with Hinata, because he knew she wasn't in love with him, she was just running away from the dense Uzumaki. So Gaara, like the cool bro that he is, gave her the push she needed to be brave. And she joined the Uzumaki-Namikaze clan, finally getting her sunshine to scratch her itch. And boy was she a hand full. It was HAWT!

And everyone (except the civilian council, cause they're a bunch of fags) lived happily ever after.

Lol cant get myself to read the Whole Story because 1. Why can Naruko use rasengan and Hiraishin? Rin needs to know these techniques to teach them and yeah dont think she could...
2. The moment i learned that Narutos "caretakers" did not tell him that he had an sister would be the point were I would destroy Konoha! (Lets be honest they would all deserve it)

Your pairings suck shit. Go fuck yourself, while I fuck your mother. Me emptying my balls into her cunny and mouth are about the only happy things she got to experience in her life, and ten times more happier than giving birth to you. After your mother finishes blissfully riding my cock and happily taking another of my load to her womb, she tells me how she wished she aborted you. Then she kisses and whispers in my ear how I could give her a better child, compared to your unwanted mistake of an ass. So why don't you go drop dead in a dumpster somewhere, it's a fitting place for where your belong.

Hey, I have to say that I love how this was doon. However, I would have liked it if there was more to it. for example where they go from here on out. but as a one-shot, it was well down. hope to read more good things like this from you soon.