Adorable.

That was really cute.

S.k.

His arms so warm,
his eyes like the northern sea,
his hair like midnight ,
his skine so pure ,
His mouth the perfect shape,
his lips in a slight smile ,
I listiened to his heart , a slow stady beat .
My head goes up and down , with the rise and fall of his breath .
I never thought , or love could be
But all the same , it felt so right yet it was so wrong .
He was the enamy ,
he was a merceanery ,
But he was all so my love .
My eyes travel up his face ,
to his lovely mark on his for head .
A simple purpule cross.
Eaven thought he worked for a man of eavil ,
and was only living because of a simple shard ,
he was my every thing ,
He was my bankotsu .

i was wondering your realy good with fanfiction could you do one just one nice really long on on kagome and byakuya

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awww thanks tempest :)

1. I LOVED MY GIFT!

2. It reminds me of a situation of me and my boyfriend, and it kind of ended like the story did so it made me very happy.

oh and this is me being curious, were you planning on continuing with the story?

Despite the lack of Bannykun and Kaggy girl getting action, I am SO glad he saved her!

This is a goood one shot. I only had time to read this one lol. I'm glad Kagome left Bankotsu. It made him realize he made a mistake for not being open with her. I loved how he saved Kagome & they got back together (: I loveed this & I can't wait to read all of your other stories again.

really good I like he ending where he opens up to her make me smile :D hehe :D

I enjoyed it very much :D

Hebi:Ok it's just me tonight KDH has had one to meany shots of tequila thank to this little bar way i would hate to be the Bartender of that bar for the last 4 think of all the crap he had to bput up with a drunken Ban.

KDH:He...Bi.*Hic*Commme lookzy ast twhe cuewt wittle *Hic*bummy deman.I wanst tooo danwce witp him.*hic*

Hebi:That not a him and put her never mind Ban how the hell do i get her home with out her husband killing me.

Great one-shot. (;

I loved Kagome and Sango's wild bar dancing scene.

I loved this oneshot so very much!