Heartbreakingly good. Ed's inner conflict is so well written, I was so caught up in his agony. I never gave the inner struggle about him being a monster much thought in the movie but you brought it out really well. Great character piece!

Ohhh snap. this story makes me horny. i love how cutting is so sexual to him. xoxo ;*

girl i loved it you put in so much detail it was great weiner! 3

You don't own Daybreakers? Because in this story you did and it makes me want to watch the movie. Loved it! and I'm still rubbing my wrists :D

Interesting and very unexpected. Loved it! Is it a one-shot? If not, please update :)