Ok, I know this is serious and there's a lot of drama right there, but, man,

"I'm a gay unicorn"

I COMPLETELY LOST IT, I'm laughing so hard that I'm crying! I can't, that part got me so hard. Ok ok, I'm gonna calm down so I can keep reading, but, pfffff... I'm a gay unicorn, I'm not getting over it LOL

Keito seems super adorable... what anime?

I hope you continue this story!

It was good. Too bad it isnt finished

Ok I am deciding to give this a shot. Even though more makes me cringe. I had just started a different story that made me lose faith in fanfiction (usagi screwing suzuki) so i need a good multi chap to boost me back up. Chapter one, here we go..

Um Nowaki's name means Typhoon.
also um are you going to continue the story?

...believe it or not, if I were Chiaki... maybe I'd lie and say the baby is Yanase's when it was in fact, Tori's. I don't know why, maybe if Yanase's lover, Hisashi, finds out... it could cause problems for them. And hopefully, break them up. I dunno where I'm going with this. But Chiaki ends up raising the kid alone in a new life...ish. This idea sounded a lot better in my head.

Okay, now I'm pissed at Yanase and Tori.

What Yanase did... and he's happy with his new lover? I can't believe it!

...AND WHY THE HELL IS CHIAKI STILL FRIENDS WITH HIM?

O my god! What is this chapter? It made me cry and laugh at the same time. I can feel every bit of emotion and i hv tears in my eyes while smiling getting the news of the twins ( and also hiroki fainting) . I literally sat up at the doubt of something wrong but when i learned abt the twins it was amazing. I know it is a bit late and u hv progressed to something unimaginably better now but thank you for this. Thank you soo much.

THANK YOU FOR THIS! I have been waiting in pure anticipation for Hiroki to finally make up with Nowaki and I loved how cute it was when he did. On a side note: THAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT THO! I'm not good at this reviewing thing but I seriously love your writing, thank you for this! Have a Good Day :)

You know, I'm not one to typically read stories with MPREG but I really enjoy the writing and the flow of this one. Thanks for the great read :)

This is so good I wish there was more! Shinobu's father is a total ass thought. I feel bad for him. Goodbye.

Ahaha! I forgot about haruhiko's mention in this chapter. What a perfect little cameo! I'm sure fuyuhiko was happy

I want to know about misakis and usagis appointment! Likely very deep!

Love it so far~~