That was a wonderful story

Nice story.

I know this is an old story but I want say that apart from the odd spelling mistake, your English is spot on! Really well done :) The only other thing is that since Harry Potter is set in the UK, it's somewhat important to know we don't say "mom" or "candy". That's American English. In British English we say "mum" ( or "mam" if you're from the North East of England like I am) and "sweets".

I'm sorry but I just had to stop reading this story in chapter 2 for one reason. You had Kakashi take is mask off. I find this quite out of character because Kakashi would never take his mask off, even for the mission (even when he was a kid).

ASDFGHJKL- TT i really hope you'll write a sequel for this- or maybe just a simple bonus chapter where the golden trio or the whole hogwarts finds out about the ninjas

Amazing story so far! I really like the idea and can't wait to find out what happenes next! But I noticed a few things in this chapter about Obito's family that you got wrong, or at least I think from what I've read online. I think it's mentioned that Obito's parents died early on in life, and he didn't have any siblings or else they would have taken care of him and we would have seen them. Thena again, you might now be following the canon version exactly considering that the war ended on a peaceful note, Rin and Obito are alive, and you plan for the Kyubbi attack to never happen.

Woah. I have to say, at the beginning of the story I was kinda bored, because it everything seems to be moving so easily and quite cliche-ly (if that's even a word XD). But you handled the Third Task and the ending really well, and I'm impressed. That was a great read, thanks. :)
I'm wondering though, how on earth did Moody smuggle a Chimera and Manticore into the Maze and Kakashi's path? That's pretty unexplainable. And you also made it so the audience couldn't see what was going on inside the maze? Because originally I think they are able to see (because what's the fun in watching a competition where you haven't even got an idea what's happening?). Anyways, what you did fit really well.
I wanted to see an all-out Kakashi fight at the end. Chidori, anyone? D: But you had the media get the information so it couldn't happen or else he'd be 'exposed' as a ninja or something. :( :( :(
Byeeee!

I knew it was coming and was even looking forward to the end, but somehow it still came to soon...
It kind of fells unfinished to me.. as thougth this can not really be the end...
It was a nice story! :D

English isn't your first language? You write better than some -scratch that, MOST - of the kids in my English class! Love the story BTW

I really enjoyed reading this! It's a fun, feel-good story with great characterization and a happy ending!

Super cute! If ya ever feel
Like writing a sequel I'll defenitly read it! Thanks for sharing! :D

Man U r so epic, I love ur story. And I wish u could make something this awesome in the future. 3 ur writing.

Yay I'm glad I found a story with Kakashi, Rin and Obito being the main characters

I LOVEEEEEEED IT! Team Minato is so great! The only thing that I would have added is more Minato, 'cause he is that awesome! Please please please write a sequel, I would love to see the consecuences of this changes in the next book. (Fangirl mode:ON) (?
Also, who got Harry at the end, Sirius or Petunia?

This story made me smile...And I usually don't smile when reading...:)