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   TheSecretPen1987 chapter 20 . 10/19/2014 I like this story, and especially this chapter. I feel people don't like Sarah, but I don't really mind her, and this chapter puts a new view on her. I love what you did adding stress to Sarah too. no one really thinks about her. keep up the good writing. You have some really good input and ideas! |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/14/2013 This is lovely I think if Sarah had more character development, people would like her more |
| Morgan Elizebeth Jacobs chapter 4 . 3/13/2013 I have the Newsies script myself. I read it and I agree, some of it should of been kept in the movie, except Sarah singing. LOL. I also have the book and there are parts in there that should of been in the movie. LOL. I read the book before I saw the movie, so I was disappointed that some of the scenes in the book are NOT in the original cut. Plus in the makings of Newsies they don't add what's in those in the final cut either. BUMMER. |
| ShamRockCenter chapter 20 . 3/12/2013 Beautiful. I love the unexplored idea that Sarah could be mad at Jack, and even be more intelligent than he is. I also love how she supports the family, not any of the men in the house. This was brilliant, and I'll be here for the next update! |
| People Person I'm Not chapter 19 . 12/22/2012 Nice. Love how perceptive her friend is. And by the way, I finished With Tears Comes Joy. |
| castiel22 chapter 18 . 7/30/2012 love the story, i liked their relationship before, but know picturing it will all your scenes i love it! |
| rellimmes chapter 14 . 7/6/2012 Ha ha! I love this story, it really makes Sarah seem, well, human! I don't see why people don't like J/S stories, they're not all that bad actually. Just thought you might like to know that Disney DID in fact try to go more into depth with Sarah but stopped because the scenes were too long. Her and her father were well-known Socialists I believe. |
| Rosebud5 chapter 18 . 7/6/2012 What? An update? Is it the end of the world? Hahahah I'm so glad you finally updated! I've missed you, girl! This was SO adorable and wonderful. Jack and Sarah's relationship just makes me so happy. Brava on a wonderful chapter! |
| People Person I'm Not chapter 1 . 10/18/2011 gaga fangirl eyesfunny saying. |
| Austra chapter 17 . 9/14/2011 Wow! A chapter after all, even though you are really busy! And yes, school is more important. Lovely chapter. I always wondered what Sarah's thoughts on Jack's betrayal would be... I may even write my own take on it; a long version. :D Great chapter, thank you so much! -Austra |
| Rosebud5 chapter 17 . 9/14/2011 Brava on another wonderful update, me dear! Is it bad that I still feel super sorry for Jack in this chapter? Even if he's being a jerk-ish? lol ;-) ~Rosey |
| Narniafan96 chapter 17 . 9/13/2011 Great job! I loved the little "cuss" word in there, seemed perfectly in character for the scene. Keep up the good work! S |
| mayday321 chapter 16 . 9/8/2011 Yay! I was right! And it's super adorable. Gosh, I haven't been on FF or tmblr in forever... my school started August 23rd, and I've got a speech every week in Speech class, starting StuCo in Debate tomorrow... and those are my electives! |
| Austra chapter 16 . 9/3/2011 Splendifforous! I love it! Please don't let this be the last chapter because this is a really, really good story! -Austra |
| Ealasaid Una chapter 16 . 9/3/2011 cute and beautiful! jack and sarah just watching the night sky together. |
