ew i hate endings like that i dont wanna picture them old :'(

i don't read OC's, like ever.

i hate them so much i immediately stop reading once i caught sight of an OC...

but damn! i love Sean to pieces, and i love the way you write! it feels so honest and natural, and very original. i will read more from you, even with the OC's floating, coz girl you are good!

This was a cute story, I liked the addition of Sean, and the 2nd last chapter was nearly heartbreaking.

Sean's a cute kid, though.

Wow. That was awesome!
Seriously.
I rarely say that.
xD

(Sorry, I'm shit at reviews...)

I am sad to see the end of this story. I was very much enjoying it, though I understand that everything must come to an end.

Whoa! It's getting good. Matt has two personalities now? More Please?

i wanted to kill you guys at the beging but you made it up to me by the end. :) keep it up guys

Wow this story is amazing. It deals with such severe issues, and the plot is a mature one. You have written it exceptionally well

My eyes almost literally popped out of their sockets when Matt and Sean got kidnapped, all the more when Matt broke and called Mello 'Master'. I just wanted to know something, Sean called Mello Mello and knew who Dan was and didn't call him master, does that mean that he didn't break like Matt did? And did Matt have slight amnesia brcause of the trauma cause he had no idea what happened right?

OHMYGOSHPLEASEUPDATESOON I CANNOT HANDLE A CRYING MELLO AS THE LAST THING I READ IN A CHAPTER I'M GONNA FRIGGIN CRY JUST THINKING MELLO LIKE THAT TTTTTATTTTT

Also, are there two of you thAt are writing this fic? I notice that there are two dofferent names during the A.N.s

I love it so much! My poor Matty T.T Please update soon!

I love it! Poor Matty and his new view of Mello. I can't wait for an update! Please, please, please, put up the next chapter soon!

why would you turn matt into this sad,depressing,poor creature? atleast seans ok. please update really soon! the time is agonizing and killing me! depressed and scared matty make me sad! T.T WELL UPDATE SOON! BYE

:/ MAAAAATT...well at least Sean seems pretty much..okay-ish now. Still though Mello's seems like he's gonna have a hard time getting Matt's conditioning to go away (oh and your idea in the authors note about why it came back to him so faster, calling Mel Master, yeah we learned that shit in Psychology class and, I'm sure you know this already, you nailed how it happens perfectly!)

More?

L

Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. I love how this is going, can't wait for the next chapter.

Gah! So beautifully sad! I've been at my dads for DAYS and couldn't get online and it was killing me! I wanted to talk to you two all week but this totally made up for it.

I'm going to make this very short because this is the first thing I've read since I've gotten back so I'll review your other stuffs whilst on the site.

Anywoodles, about doll house;

I still muchly love Sean. He's adorable, however sad his story may be. But as soon as Matt said master my reaction was a groan and an, Aaaw, Maaaat? C'mon. And then he started to do the master thing with Mello at home and it's so sad!

I can't wait for the next chapter and this will definitely be the topic of conversation with my friends tomorrow.

The end, I guess.

Oh yeah, and my sister says hi to you both

Much love from

Mitsuki Shikaru