Well, I hope you're doing well. I know about how difficult things can get. Like you, I hope the muses will grace us with their inspiration.

This is a wonderful story, and I hope it will continue. Many blessings upon you.

Interesting definitely and i hope you finish this :)

question though, could Bella be turned eventually? i mean poor Rosalie!

also.. i personally think that Alice and Jasper should never be separated.. but oh well xD

How has everyone let Edward get away with all the bs? I know he is the Golden Boy but this may be going way to far into enabling bad behavior. Besides that, glad to see you back and can't wait to see where you take this story.

I really enjoy reading this story. Keep up the awesome work.

Damn dude! This shit is good.

please continue please continue

Please continue please I really love this story

Loving this story! but I think you should have edwards attitude explained is his past, paranoia update it soon.

The romance is so confusing. And a bit annoying. It’s sudden then stops and gets crazy then jumps ahead and repeats.

Also story needs editing, words out of place and misspelled words

So many spelling and grammar errors. Otherwise loving this story

I hope this doesn’t just follow canon with Rose replacing Edwards...

I just realized this story was updated! I am looking forward to seeing more! Will you have Bella go into why her recovery was so much longer after Patrick vs what happened after the last one? It seems like this was different than the last one. Though of course there was no ‘fatale’ stabbing this time after the Quickening, but it seemed like Bella recovered more quickly last time even with the stabbing than this time. Also would love to know what Edward’s issue is. I mean Bella is Rosalie’s Mate it’s not like they are taking in some random human, so I’m wondering why the Family isn’t having a more powerful reaction to Edward’s action of deliberately trying to have Bella killed. Especially knowing what would happen to Rosalie should that happen. Anyway looking forward to reading more!

hey, thanks for this story. I hope that you find the inspiration to finish this. until next time

Please update this soon please

Ack! Thanks for the update. Short but soooo good. Can’t wait to find out what the real deal is.