| Reviews for Hell on Earth |
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InkMango the FABULOUS chapter 12 . 7/17/2014 Oh my Chaos... FRANK IS WHEATLEY! :O |
Vi-Violence chapter 15 . 8/25/2012 This is great! Please update! |
axel100 chapter 5 . 2/24/2012 It always seemed like GLADos reminded me of Nurse Rachet and here you are bringing her in too! Aperture Science won't be big enough for both of them! |
RisingSm0ke chapter 15 . 2/8/2012 I think you have done a really good job keeping everyone in character, well. Wheatley doesn't talk quite enough but other than that I think it's pretty good~! Love the little conversations between the cores, they make me laugh. :D I hope you update soon, love the story~! :) |
Artemi99 chapter 15 . 8/29/2011 I'm really, really, REALLY liking this story! You have much writing talent (structurally and creatively), and I can't wait until you write more! |
MegaShinyObject chapter 15 . 8/28/2011 Wow, I'm really impressed by this. This was one of those stories that I was avoiding, and I'm not entirely sure why. *shrug* But now that I've finally managed to get over myself enough to read this, I've actually enjoyed it. I can't wait for more, really. You're a pretty good writer, and I would like to apologize for avoiding this story in the first place. It was terrible of me. |
WildCard-Yes Man chapter 15 . 8/27/2011 Great chapter. |
XxOngakuxX chapter 15 . 8/26/2011 I was super happy when I saw that there was a new chapter! Thanks for posting! (sorry my review isn't longer but it's 2:19 am and I'm tired so I can't think of anything else to say!) |
KizzyThaFox chapter 15 . 8/26/2011 Thanks for the long awaited chapter! Perfect end to a really crappy day. I couldn't help but laugh at GLaDOS, her humor is the best. :3 You're really good at writing action scenes, because you can make it interesting without being jumbled and confusing. Not too fast, not too slow, and not too descriptive on certain parts. You're also great at rewriting the characters in the right voice, if that makes sense. What I mean is, when someone like Wheatley for instance talks, you write it in a way that sounds just like something he would say. Vocabulary, accent, everything, which is really challenging to alot of people, including me, so kudos on that. I was kinda bummed that we didn't get to find out who the new kid was, but then again, that still gives me something to wait for. Half of me kinda hopes that GLaDOS might have gotten a hold of a Rosie. o.o The only bad thing was that I thought it was spelled 'moat' but I could be wrong. Anyway, congrats on another great chapter, and I already can't wait for the next. :) Always, Kizzy. |
Drachu chapter 1 . 8/25/2011 Just, wow. I absolutely love this story! Chell is such a difficult character to write for, but I think you've got her personality exact. Props for always having space core there, and sticking to his amusing OCD personality! I think the next time I have to go to the doctor's, i'll have an overwhelming need to just shout "space" at random times! Oh, and you deserve over 9,000 cakes for the slight romance between chell and wheatly! You've written this story in such detail I'm sure that even non-fans would love this!3 |
Souzou the Insane chapter 14 . 8/22/2011 Maybe I should just favorite this story, because I haven't stopped reading as soon as I get an update, and I'm always left wanting more! D: Ah! |
Grimmling chapter 14 . 8/19/2011 Forgot to add, i DO have an account, i was just lazy to log in. But i'm still favoriting this. ;D |
Grimmling chapter 14 . 8/19/2011 KYAAAAA i swear i'm addicted to this. xD Good job getting the personality cores... personality perfect! Too bad Space couldn't become human. : BUT, i like the implied romance between Chell and Wheatley :D if there is. XD i might just be imagining that. Keep up the work! Or GLaDOS will crush your hopes and dreams. Then put you in the room where robots scream at you. xD seriously though keep writing. SPAAAAAAACE- -SPAAAAAAACE. |
elegant Usurper chapter 14 . 8/19/2011 seeing that this story was updated: fuck yesss! reading this story: Space Core y u so cute. Wait. No. Why are you so mean. Wwhyyy. Isn't it possible to have a happy ending even though it's no where near the ending? Sure, it could be seen coming (the GLaDOS stopping them in their tracks), but why did it have to be so soon. I feel so... deprived... glub. ALL THESE DEAD ENDS AND FEAR REALLY MAKES ME WANT TO READ MORE. |
kt2209 chapter 14 . 8/19/2011 Heheh, SURPRISE! I'm on both sites! I'm surprised Frank hasn't taken over Wheatley again... Although, I guess he's still tired. And this is going great! GLaDOS has them now! So everything is going to be juussst fine... *eyes shift nervously* But seriously, keep going! This is really good! And I mean really good! I'm not lying, I'm not doing tricks, this is really a really amazing story, so... Yeah... On you go! |