Keep going. nice story.

I like it, seems the world isn't as simple as Ed would like it to be. Looking forward to more.

Another great chapter. I just hope you can manage to kinda make it EdWin despite the prologue. Make it EsWin and I'll do anything. Much love

MORE PLEASE! hope you finish this because it has potential!

I'll make you a deal. I'll favorite/alert if you promise to update soon.

I'll take that as a yes, no going back now.

Thank you, thank you THANK YOU! You know how hard it was to find a good FMA fic? VERY! I finally found one! And now I thanks you as I add this to favorites.

Anywho, I usually never read anything where Ed or Al dies. But this is just too good. I love it, and I will keep reading and reviewing if you keep writing.

ooh codes... :D

This Martin sounds too perfect... and Ed the shame! How could he act like that i should spank him ! I want more! Its so good, please update soon! :D

Oh wow! That was powerful! I was actually crying! First fanfic to ever make me do that, yes! (Well, alright, not the first, but it's very rare for me to cry at a fanfic!)

I haven't finished the story, but I know Al doesn't die (at least that's what I'm sure of...ack I hope he doesn't! Don't tell me!), but still...the thought of Alphonse dying is sad, and even a bit scary. I could feel Edward's mourning, Winry's tears...the feeling of wanting to bring Alphonse back...very nice job!

I love your story its so good. I could feel the emotion and you put it so well in words. I love your story though I usually dont like stories like these but you did such an amazing job, i even cried a little, so does this mean Winry and Ed arent ending up together? I cant wait to see what you have next, keep up the amazing work and update soon. :)

aww :C what happened between Ed and Winry? TTATT I love EdWin!

Alphonse died! Awwww! How did this happen! Poor Ed...

Good job though. It's off to a really good start. Please update~