Charlie's a cutie

Love this story!

Adorable story! This is the second time I've read it...or third.

This fic is so good! Please come back and finish. I need to know what happens to these two crazy kids!

I wish there were more of this, but judging by the last publication date, the odds are probably slim and none. I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you.

"Incase" is not a word. The correct phrase is "just in case."

"straitening up" Uh, it's STRAIGHTENING.

She would have SHUDDERED in fear, not SHUTTERED.

"Edward peaked up at me." It's PEEKED.

"...peak over my shoulder at Edward." It's PEEK, which means "a quick look," not PEAK, which means "a pointed top."

Every year I reread this story and am still hoping someday you will find the will to finish it. You are truly talented and your story sucks the reader in from the start! Pretty sure you dont even read this anymore but one can still hope.

Sigh. This was such an awesome story. I loved the fluff at the end. It felt like they deserved it, after all that they've been through. I loved how you kept the meeting with Esme a secret. I wouldn't want to read it anyway. Thank you so much for sharing.

Wow. This chapter was just... phew. Heavy. But awesome. So damned awesome. Your story plot planning is the best I've seen in fanfics lately. I was reallu nor exoecting the move.

Lord. I can't believe Edward actually did that! Flirting with the cashier AND calling bella a kid!

Oh god. This story's so good...