I really like this story! You're writing is amazing and oh gosh the feelings!
I like how Tsuna had decided to stay with hibari ( not because I love 1827 a little tad more than 697). But it makes it somehow special, somehow.
Ans I kinda like how it ended. I don't wish that Tsuna dies but in this story, it's ... I don't know, how to explain it. Well... I loved it and you are an amazing writer ! xD

I guess Hibari really did keep his promise to follow Tsuna. (︿)

This was bittersweet... I love every piece of 1827 (because I'm 1827 extreme shipper) and love how Tsuna stay with kyouya till the end.
The ending? did Kyouya died too? because of the injuries? so 1827 died together? I couldn't help but thought that was really romantic :3 (things like even death would never tear them apart) and Kyouya did say he would never let Tsuna go, didn't he? That he will even chased him wherever he go no matter what... and he really did...

though I would prefer they both alive and stay together, I also adore the idea of them leaving together...

...I don't even know what I just blabbered...

all in all, I like it! (especially since it ended 1827) XD

Well I read it. :D

The plot is good. And I like how the story progressed. I can feel the emotion of regret clearly. (Mukuro's a jerk, but I like him anyway. XD) :3 I like how Reborn's being protective of Tsuna here. I could always see him acting like that underneath his tough exterior. Hibari too. I liked Hibari the most when he told Tsuna that he wouldn't let him go until he died. That's really sweet, especially considering Tsuna's situation. It's no wonder Tsuna chose to be with him in the end.

The story's sad. Really sad. Though for some odd reason, I find myself smiling at parts where I'm supposed to be getting a depressed feel. Eh, me and my own twisted mind.

I like the story, and I'd like it better without the grammar mistakes. But those could be overlooked. :D You have a slight problem with the redundancy of some words. :3

Well I hope that helped! :D You have such great imagination.

Ah, that is sad. Nice story.

This was a sweet story. It all seemed cliche though. I really don't have any more to say than that. It was detailed and nicely paced and the characterization was rather fresh. However, the disease seemed very familiar, I believe I read it in another oneshot. Just changing it from a brain tumor and adding more detail and how it develops, I think, would improve it.

I was rather surprised by how Tsuna did not live at the end. I was assuming he would, as I obviously did not check the genre. Anyway, I found that interesting and unique.

Nice writing, over done concept. Is that all right to say?

Oh hot damn, what is this feeling? the taste of bitterness of a lover leaving his side for the sense of his foolishness? Is this what Mukuro's fate comes across in EVERY fanfic that I've read? Does it always have to be one-sided? Poor, poor Mukuro. Sometimes it was no wonder that people prefer to ship him with Byakuran (though I despise this pair)

Ah, ahem, forgive my random choice of words for the start of this review, now, i hope you won't be startled by me but I guess it won't be a crime to say:

"OMIGOD! THAT WAS SAD! SO DAMN SAD! WHY DOES HE HAVE TO DIE? WHY WON'T THERE BE ANOTHER CHANCE? A CHANCE FOR THE THREE TO BOND OR SOME SORT LIKE THAT? CRAP! YOU MADE ME LIKE A SICK CRYBABY WHEN THE STORY ENDS! WHY TSUNA? WHY?

Ahem, but then again, I knew that Tsuna is going to die judging by your summary let alone your genre. So in other words, Tsuna is more likely to die anyway. But still, I was half-hoping that Mukuro will be in Tsuna's side rather than Hibari (though I ship 1827 better than 6927.. but sometimes in tragedies, Mukuro FITS the lover type for Tsuna)

Well, now about your characterization and the events on their way: Technically, I find Tsuna confessing Mukuro cute making you think of good ol' times when you had your first love. It was sweet and I already knew Mukuro was half-hearted of this confession. SO it wasn't really that OOC. As the events went on with Tsuna breaking up with Mukuro and he started to date Hibari, something came to me that it was kind of strange. That hibari suddenly popped out of the scene even though tsuna knew hibari longer than Mukuro. If that's the case, Hibari should be like... biting his herbivore's lover to death? or maybe I was confused that Tsuna might KNOW Hibari right after the break up?

Then there's this strange feelings of Mukuro. Funny that I can finally witness Mukuro's confused love in fanfics for the first time. Usually he is pretty much good at hiding it too well to both the fiction characters and the readers themselves. But I guess that was also another cute factor as well.

Then there's the "tragedy" of having some sort of disease. It was too abrupt. It suddenly came out of no where even though Tsuna was healthy for a long while. But then again, diseases are always like that. Always coming in your way that wasn't supposed to be there. Ah, life~

And ever since that sickness, the story became more intriguing than the cute moments and break up awhile back.

I like how you put the events when Mukuro tried his best to see Tsuna. Although in some cases if he has "illusionary powers" it won't be that difficult and that is why it is kind of hard to adapt this kind of Mukuro. A mukuro with no illusions, desperately trying to get inside the hospital bed of Sawada Tsunayoshi with his "bodyguards" guarding him 24/7. And it was sad that THEY HAD NEVER INTERACT OTHER THAN THE REJECTION. It was kind of sad.

And the sadding part is that:

Tsuna died.

yes, I knew it was bound to happen.

BUt seeing that Mukuro was waiting to befriend Tsuna than nothing, it was kind of sad.

And you did a great job out of this long one-shot. :D

But will there be a sequel? Yeah right! It will be weird to see a Ghost Tsuna, ya know! LOL Okay, never mind with that. Still, so sweet.

Thanks for writing this!

~Lal

I teared up a little while reading. You did a good job on the tragedy. :) I still can't believe Tsuna died. . .but at least he took Hibari with him, right? That just means they can be together forever. I pity Mukuro who was left behind and everyone who were close to Tsuna; his death was tragic.

There were some grammatical errors that made me cringe, so I suggest looking back at the extract and correcting them, if you can. :)

Overall, I really like this despite it being cliché-ish (There are a lot of character-dying-because-of-an-incurable-illness fics, but they never made me tear up like yours did). I wish to read more from you.

~Mizu96

I cried. This story is really well-written. Write more.

So sad *cries* whyyyy did u make it so sad D

... my this was wow, it really torched me.