Ops hime’s power was gone? And She doesn’t bother on it and won’t even missed the fairies..I think on this story there’s no so much action type or used of their power for her to be ok without it...how could she protect herself and her baby from a hollow attack of her power has gone..so I think no such thing as more hollow fight or more enemy to come out..this story we’ll be more on a normal life she have haha..not be in a fight and no villain..but I wonder where her power amd suddenly gone..might be in a vacation lol the little blue men are on vacation coz her power are not useful in this story haha..maybe they were on the baby transfer haha

I love her so much I love both of them so much (the ending on this chapter was so so sweet) ichi being always their for hime on her pregnancy supporting caring loving her...yes definitely they wil gonna be great parents *smile*

That was a perfect Xmas for kurosaki fam especially ichi and hime with their daughter in the tummy hehe..ichi was so sweet *smile*

This couple was really adorably cute..they bet for the gender of their baby lol..so ichi wins it’s a girl..I thought they are having twins and it’s gonna be a tie lol

Oh no! Where's Ichigo's surliness and adorably awkward shyness?! Even if (or perhaps especially because) his friends know about everything now, I feel like he would be extremely embarrassed and try to cover it up with his brashness or just being generally loud and awkward. (q.e.d. The incident with Yoruichi teasing him during his training to achieve bankai)

I personally don't think Orihime would do that with her money, let alone spend more than half of the windfall on a car like a Benz but..it is what it is.

Oh wow. You were right.. Orihime is WAY out of character! :O

Side note: a lot of these symptoms of hers are appearing way, way early. For example, generally true morning sickness doesn't show up until about week 6.

It's usually completely safe to moderately exercise during pregnancy, although high impact sports and blows to the abdomen should be avoided.

Anyways, I'm sure it sounds like I'm being super critical, and I actually have a few more tips, but I've been told before I come off as condescending (which 250% NOT my intention!) so I'm going to stop now and genuinely thank you for sharing (and completing) your story and continue to read on and see how it goes!

Thx, M. C.

Orihime’s actually super OOC... none of her mannerisms are the same. Not to mention how seemingly little she trusts anyone. That part doesn’t make since at all so far. I imagine you were trying to go for some sort or realism here, but this kind of situation between Orihime and Ichigo wouldn’t go like this. It’s very awkward and I feel like I’m not reading about the Orihime at all.

I just finished reading it for the 5th time xD

This was a fantastic read well done

would like to know if a sequel is coming out and i enjoyed reading this story all the way through.

OMFG toshiro you crack me up!

I hope Tochiro is visiting Karin. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I got so excited when Ichigo proposed they have such a perfect relationshiphmmm two women... If they aren't new characters my guess will be Akira and Sora's girlfriend (I forgot the name) or Mai, I don't know why but I also suspect her... Ooh pls make the next one x3

I am a sucker for fluff, and this story had it in spades! It would have been easy to completely AU this, eliminate the danger, and just make it all about Ichigo, Orihime, their relationship, and how their friends react to the new situation in which they found themselves. You decided to keep it Bleach, however, and that raised the level of tension in a way that kept me worried for the characters. This was lovely, and I am definitely looking forward to the sequel and more Mina! Thanks and congratulations!

Cant wait for the epicness to continue, great job with this story, and a great story to start a series with. If this has anything to do with quincies, its a true adventure now