PLEASE UPDATE! I NEED MORE MALRAE! Besides, this is one of the best stories I've read since rhea hiryuu's Circles.

this is really nice
I liked the way you described the underworld
I would loved if you could update
the suspense is killing me, don't worry not literally. I will be there when you update
waiting for your update, is like waiting for your favourite T.V show series to release a new episode
pretty please with cherry on top, can you update this beautiful piece of literature

Really cool story. I would love for you to continue. I'm excited to find out what happens next.

update plz ? v.v"

this whole meeting is so civil.. where's the demony part here? arguments are demony btw...the concept here is nice though.. where's the gore and the human sacrifices? o3o gooore please :3

..ignore my weirdness plz.

lol.. rae gave trigon the finger? nice touch xD

Gah. Love the story. Keep writing it, and update more often. Dx I look forward to reading future chapters.

Please, please update! This is an amazing story!

Please, I'm begging you, UPDATE!

I would really like to read more what the castle looks like. Please update soon. hugs n kisses

*victory dance* I am so so happy to see this update! Perhaps my begging had its effect? There was a disappointing lack of sexy makeouts, but I understand that keeping people in character and all that crap may slightly affect the chance of said scene in the near future. *disappointed sigh* However, I loved how pissed off Raven got - and how you actually made her find out about her situation. Her determination is one of my favourite traits about her and so many fanfic writers portray her as some kind of damsel in distress or, even worse, an overpowered impulsive fool.
So thanks for not doing that...
Hoping there will be more (regular!) updates and even a progression in Rae/Mal's relationship - though with those two it could be a while...
Also (this isn't technically part of the review) I read on your profile about all the other potential stories on this pairings and they look AMAZING so you should definitely write them, if that annoying thing called real life doesn't get it the way. I mean, fanfiction should obviously be your priority.

Asdfghjkl I'm so glad you updated _ I love seein even get more and more annoyed - one day she'll small ad that will be funny... Hope we'll contact the titans soon - robin will blow a fuse when he finds out what happened. Looking forward to more

wow this story is amazing! I really enjoy the chapters and I'm glad that you kept Malchior the same godly bastard as before. Update soon :)

Thank u for the update :)

Haha perhaps her father decides to take certain liberties with drinks to ah, release inhibitions. To make them more cozy?

So, I was initially worried that you'd stopped writing fanfiction, or maybe you'd died or something terrible had happened - but no, you just abandoned this fic in favour of others.
Ok, so abandoned is a little harsh, but you really can't just leave us on a cliffhanger like that! We haven't seen making out or anything yet...
This is honestly one of the best fanfics I've read because you keep everyone in character - especially Malchior, you really make him a jerk - and your writing style is superb. I love the originality of the storyline, and think it has great potential. The length of the chapters is a little disappointing, but it's good quality.
So I'm begging now (on my knees), please please please update, I really need to know what happens!
And if you're being a really nice author, you might even throw in some steamer scenes... *blindingly obvious hint*
Rawr x