Y u no continue?

are you making the chaps?

ola

OHGOSH 3

I have a feeling this is going to be a PERFECT fanfiction :D everyone is in character, no grammar mistakes, and its well written :D not to mention you have Hope as the perfect age :3 not too young, not too old, yet the same wonderful hope we all know and love :D

PLEEEEEAAAASE UPDATE. I will worship you if you do :D

'I'll try to update as soon as I can (shouldn't take that long since the next chapters are already written. There'll probably be four or five of them)' alright, if you have done it... where are the chapters? ) This is interesting so far and I want to read more

Not too shabby! Good to see a fellow shipper of HopeLight.

So you're new to this pairing, huh? Ever need to know anything you can ask me XD.

You like HopeLight stories? My community 'HopeXLight' has about every story about them on this site. Go ahead and check it out if you like! Oh and if you don't mind, i'll add your story too!

Well, i'd like to say...Good job! Not very often i'd find a chapter where i couldn't find any grammatical errors.

Then again, it IS KINDA SHORT.

But this is kind of a prologue i guess, so i'll leave it at that.

Good starting...This wasn't all that bad. A bit of a cliche but still nice.

You ever need any help, you can come find me, eh?

I'm happy to help! Info provider, Plot idea provider or even grammatical and format checker!

Free of charge service of course.

Anyway, i can't give you any judgement cuz this is the prologue, but i think this story has potential. Keep going!

Yours Truly,

AssasinZAssasin

Oh surprises!

I just love surprises. lol.

I think this is gonna be good. Hmm. Let's see where this leads to, hmm? :D

Update Soon!

PinkhairedSoldier