293 words, that's all you need to make a good fanfict. This is short but the simplicity made it better than most of the Mitsuru/Minato fic.

A short but good one-shot.
That really reminds me of my first time getting Mitsuru's social link; I was addicted to it. But still, it's really sad that there aren't that much stories about Minato/Mitsuru. Most people keep writing about Minato/Yukari which I, personally, don't like so much.

I liked it

Very Good!

I was surprised the brevity made this piece very refreshing from many of the others I've seen in the past where there was the notion that "The more detail there is, the better the story will be." This is not always entirely true. I believe that getting the story across in the most effective way possible is what must truly be focused on. To rely on detail is only needed to facilitate getting the story across. Only calling the right amount of detail can help the story flow in a more better pace for reading.

A job well done on this piece of creative writing.

Tres bien.

So cute:) they are so meant to be but noooooo nobody sees it -.-

adorable fic. 3

I really like it. Although it is quite short, it seems complete. I absolutely adore Minato/Mitsuru fanfics. Really nice story.