Reviews for OCs survival on the Killing Floor
Anything170 chapter 17 . 5/14/2013
Woah I totally forget to post a review. Anyway AWESOOME chapter as always I'm back to writing my stories and working on Hunted (My zombie story with G.U.N and some crazy experiments) and always Update whenever
That One Dude chapter 17 . 12/15/2012
This. Story. Is. TERRIBLE. You really do need to find a better way express your story. It's too fucking supid. Stick with the damn plot and you would get more reviews, but it seems like you can't. The sentences are too choppy and you end up using the WRONG past tense in some sentences. Sheesh! It's a horrible story. Just make sure you'll edit before it goes WAY off hand.

Buh-bye - That One Dude
Poppy the Rabbit chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Name: Poppy the Rabbit.

Species: Well, Rabbit

Personality: imagine a rabbit female version of Charmy Bee.

Crush: Well, Charmy Bee.

Appearance: Orange fur with sky blue eyes and tail-length wavy brown hair.

Clothing: lavander dress with two pink belts across the waist and a lavander bow with a red jewel on her left ear. She has a matching red jem on both of the cuffs of her lavander gloves.

(She can kick A S S! so BE CAREFULLL!)
Neon Dash the Hedgehog chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
I find this hilarious aswell as easy to read. Keep up thee good work. *gives pie and bag of cookies*
Duskzilla chapter 17 . 8/11/2012
Ha ha that Theo and Discord bit last chapter got me.
Discord:My face hurts.
Eclipse:I can imagine.
Also I would make an account but there's a few problems.
1:I don't have a e-mail account(my life sucks)
2:I barely get to use my laptop and review by 3DS a lot.
3:Discord isn't a bit different he's a LOT different was the best line last chapter
Other then that those chapters were great.
Discord:Not for me I got punched in the eye.
Anyway I have a off-panel idea.
Name:Why that species?
Info:Theo decides to ask Discord why he has the appearance of the echidna leading to Discord explaining how he had to take Knuckles Shadow because he was the only one around leading Theo to mock Discord saying he took a knucklehead's shadow causing them to fight again.
Eclipse:*gets popcorn*I'm gonna sit back and watch.
Discord:I sure hope I survive this and if I do I'm gonna kill Mephiles(dad) for not telling me I had a brother and uncle.
Neon Dash the Hedgehog chapter 17 . 8/10/2012
Hilarious :D
StarlightChild96 chapter 17 . 8/9/2012
Hahaha I love it X3 it's great I can't wait until you update agian.
Anything170 chapter 16 . 8/6/2012
Booyah man AWESOME chapter hope to see more of your awesome writing. Update soon :p
Klaiborne Lorenzo chapter 16 . 8/6/2012
Well this was awesome! soooo many chars on here! *parent voice* next time you need to tell me when you put Richter in the story. *normal voice* So i can see how awesome he is! I'm glad you put him in the story! Just be sure to tell me when he pops in okey-dokey?

All and all this story is pretty good!
shianen chapter 15 . 6/10/2012
IT'S A COMEBACK! XD

Sorry about the caps..

Awesome chapter! Personally loved it :3 Can't wait for more! Loved the little clips at the bottom! I legi cracked up when I saw the 'Tails Doll' one

I am seriously anticipating more...HURRY UP MAN!. Naw jkjk take your time :3

Love with a Chocolate Chip Cookie,

xXCookieGiverXx
duskzilla chapter 15 . 6/10/2012
Hmm I've read all the chapters so far and I gotta say it's awesome

Eclipse:Seems kinda deadly.

Discord:Feels like home to me.

Which is why I'm sending Discord there.

Discord:Exactly wait what?

All of Discord's info I sent in to We're Left 4 Dead in Mobius so I don't know if you're still accepting but I want to submit him

Discord:This oughta be good.

Eclipse:Yeah for you.
Noir The Fox chapter 15 . 4/30/2012
AWESOME COMEBACK CHAPTER! I'm so glad you continued this! Seeing Noir in rage mode really makes up for the big gap! Great new chapter! Aw and Milo CAN have a hug *hugz*. Mobian comedians is a funny addition, but you know what TD is like, he loves his omnoms! P.S I don't actually leave dead offerings for floating dolls in real life, I leave him tinned tuna :3

P.P.S Trolololol Levvy, I was more evil than you HURRRDURRR

P.P.S you are my favourite author on this site :)
Anything170 chapter 15 . 4/29/2012
No I'm not missing in action I'm just writing and reading also 24/7 and I just have not review and I have stories of my own. Look forward to see next chapter and Don's rage or should I say Ash
ahamkaras chapter 15 . 4/29/2012
To be honest, your story is probably the only Sonic story I read now, and I definetly know why.

Although all the dialog makes reading this somewhat of a pain, I can still say that much of it is tasteful and the context is lovely.

I don't have much to say other than, great job on this chapter and I will be highly anticipating the next update. Good luck!

-P3 LadyChaos
Inactive Account708 chapter 15 . 4/29/2012
...gasp. You updated. El gasp.

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *glass is heard shattering*

I've been checking my updates for this! I can now party by eating cookies!

...I only have five...T_T

Tachi: Swift! You no have money?

I do, but I'm a cheapskate. That's 87p worth of chocolate chip and biscuit!
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