Reviews for Pirates Versus Privates
Anthony Dazet Ne chapter 1 . 8/24
That was a pretty exciting adventure story, don't you think?
ChaosAngel4us chapter 1 . 3/7
I absolutely love this story. I read it YEARS ago and for some reason it was on my mind the other day. I’m so glad I was able to find it again because it’s absolutely stunning. I love how you created such a beautiful, intricate world and I can’t say enough about how much I love it. Thank you so much for giving us this story! I actually might start it over again tomorrow if I’m being honest.
Guest chapter 34 . 1/19
Aw, that was such a wonderful story. I love how you incorporated so many different Disney worlds/characters in one fic.
And I absolutely love this version of Mickey Mouse. He was very interesting, and at the same time very simple. Yes, he didn't always understand how romance and women work so he made a ton of mistakes, and yet all his thoughts, actions and feelings were very easy to understand.
Though I do admit reading Minnie's constant denial of everything became really frustrating at some point, haha. In general, Minnie in this story confused me a lot. First was when Mickey escaped Hawkins and she suddenly started hating him, even though just before that she had expressed how she didn't want him to die. Another very confusing AND frustrating time was on their date, when everything was perfect until she saw that photo of her. Like, I get her anger about this particular sort of photo and all, but she instantly assumed the worst. But other than that kind of situations, she was a pretty likeable character. I like how brave and dedicated she could be.
Those were the main characters, but I can't leave a review without mentioning Donald and Daisy in it! Those two had a crazy and very, very interesting relationship in this story. I'm certainly glad they fixed things between them in the end.
Anyway, this fic was an amazing ride. Gotta say the romance, while usually not my favorite genre, was handled very well here and balanced by adventure, friendship, humor, drama and other things very nicely. I also appreciate how you handled all the romantic scenes in such a pure, wholesome fashion (yes, even with Mickey expressing his love a little too... bodily, haha) without making them overly erotic unlike some of other fanfiction stories I've read, as good as they otherwise are. More of a subtle approach is way more tasteful in my opinion and you nailed it.
Unfortunately, even though you had someone edit it for you, I could still find some errors (typos, wrong words etc.) here and there. But that's a small flaw, your writing is very good other than that.
To sum up, WELL DONE! Thank you for this story so much, it's so good that perhaps I'll even reread it someday :)
The Imaginative Lightbulb chapter 34 . 12/10/2018
This story was a thrilling adventure.

I loved the way everything was blended so seamlessly. Morgana's upbringing against Magica, The rocky relationship of Donald & Daisy, The forbidden love of not just Mickey & Minnie, but of Goofy & Millie as well. There are thousands more that I could count, but the amount of effort, time, and craft you put into this story is just splendid beyond compare.

I'm sad it's over, but of course, all good things must come to an end eventually. Whether the story is decent or a beautifully woven one like this, it will eventually meet a close. I've enjoyed watching and practically living the show you put on through this story. I hope you continue the wonderful path of writings that you have so seamlessly created through these Fanfics.

- From, The Imaginative Lightbulb
Sugar chapter 34 . 7/5/2017
Holy fuck! I have been reading this for three days. I have screamed, shrieked, gushed AND giggled like an idiot the whole time. This was beautiful and perfect. And by half way I was so worried that I'd get to the end and it wouldn't be finished (Mobile doesn't tell me if stories are finished or not. Picking stories are a guessing game.). This is now one of my two favourite two Disney fics. A real treasure. 3
YarningChick chapter 34 . 7/22/2016
This was recommended by a friend of mine. It was well worth the reading! It can be hard to have so many subplots and characters going at the same time, but you really pulled it off!
Thanks for a fantastic read!
Guest chapter 21 . 9/20/2014
HOLY SHIT! I love this chapter! Minnie's desperation to make sure he's safe! Oswald and Ortensia's coming together, and working together, all to help Minnie and Mickey! Roger and Jessica are SO in character, and all of Minnie's inner fears, regrets, hopes and dreams being laid out on a table in such a deliciously symbolic way!

Mickey's awesome and frightful anger, Mirage's pathetic squealing, and I love how Oswald and Ortensia responded to his display! And how Minnie lets her hold him! IT'S SO SWEEET!

This is the BEST fanfiction ever! So much attention is paid to every minute detail! I've read it over twice! Please never give up writing, you're so awesome at it!
H. Mae chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
i do not know y i found dis only now! okay i'll b honest, mickey mouse wasn't sumtin' i would normally go for, but wen i saw twisted-wind's art it jst got me hooked. i saw the pirate v.s private poster and fell in love with it. and now after reading ur story, it just made things official. :)) i love mickey! 3 ur work is really good! d story was amazing, and d way everything fit together so perfectly is jst sooo - i dnt have the words to describe it. (cuz i certainly dnt think i cn pull sumtin like dis off)
SmoothiesGaloreS chapter 34 . 2/11/2014
I LOVE IT! i first saw d picture of pirates v.s privates in twisted-wind's gallery in deviantart. she's d one who made me fall in love with mickey, and now you just made me fall harder! :)) y dd it take so long for me to find this! Anyways i love the story 3 srsly do! the plot, the characters, i love it all. And i like how it all smoothly went down. u dd a terrific job!
Rookie70Penguin chapter 34 . 1/14/2014
You. Are. The. Best. Plain and simple. Said and done. No use in denying it or becoming 'Private Minnie-fied'. I've read this along with Storybits and I'm hooked. Thanks for aiding my obsession with Mickey and Minnie by writing such wonderful tales about them.
fatal whisper chapter 34 . 12/30/2013
This is one of the greatest stories ever put on this website. For the past three days, you've had me completely enraptured with this gem. The characters were all excellent, the romance well developed, and all those plot threads amiably woven together! I salute you. :)
sweetheartforever101 chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
Ugh, I forgot to log myself in again!

So sorry again, but the "Guest" that reviewed this chapter was me again and somehow I wasn't logged in again.

Don't worry, I'll make sure I'm logged in before I post my review next time. Sorry about that.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
So far, this story is getting better and better!

Awww, minnie and mickey are bonding, how cute!

Also, I love how mickey is being a Tsundere in this chapter. And if you don't know what "Tsundere" means, it's a japanese word that means when someone doesn't want to show their real feelings to someone, or in this case admit their real feelings to someone, they act the complete opposite of how they feel toward them. And that's exactly what mickey is doing in this chapter.

And I also love the ending when mickey was trying to get closer to minnie but he forgot about the jail bars and bumped into them, so adorable!
sweetheartforever101 chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I'm sorry but that reviewer that reviewed chapter 1 that's named "Guest" was me. Somehow I wasn't log in when I made my review, sorry about the confusion.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Before I review this chapter, let me just say that I did read this before but only a little bit of the first chapter. I thought the story wasn't that intresting so I decided to stop reading it. But few months I've been here in FanFiction, I notice your story has the most reviewed disney story in all the disney storys on FanFiction. Also I was on DeviantArt a week ago and I found some fanarts of Mickey and Minnie as private and pirate. As soon as I saw those fanarts, I knew they're from your story. So I thought "If this story has the most reviewed disney story on FanFiction, and has fanarts on DeviantArt, maybe I should give this story another read", and so I did. And guess what... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!

So far, this story gets more intresting and more creative. I love how this world contains both military life and pirate life, and I love how this world is futuristic but also contains old fashioned stuff, kind of like the "Treasure Planet" movie. Speaking of Treasure Planet, I love how you put Captain Amelia in the story, along with Gadget from "Chip and Dale: Rescue Rangers". I'm starting to love this story, can't wait to read more!
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