Lol 2ch and I’m hook
Sherry: Wake yo ass up!
Hat guy: O.O what are You doing here!?
Luna: ...

Sherry is main girl

Heh, when playing the tag force & ds games, I always either called the player K.C, Kenshiro or Kenny (the last two supposedly for whether looking at it as jap or eng dub respectively). I would ask if it was some subliminal message into prompting K names but several youtube vids have the player with different names so it seems rather moot.

This was a good story. I really liked it. Good job!:) Now to read the sequel.

BEWK

Waaah! Fake confession day! Sherry you tease XD She's gonna make him work for it xP

That was a quick 'final battle', this is better the spent 2-5 chapter on a final battle like how the anime would. I'm liking this whole love Triangle. Also its so rare to find a Tag Force based FanFiction with Red Hat.

your story has inspired me to write one just like it execpt it's a hat guy and akiza pairin it go's from tgf4 through tgf5

I love this story, I really do :) Thanks for getting me interested in the Tag Force series, and I'm sorry if this is such a short review. I promise on the next chapter that I will make it longer, you can count on it! And I'll actually sign in. XD

One thing to advise on this chapter- break down the first two paragraphs. They look squashed together and a little messy, and it's quite hard to understand.

ok

it probly could be if you think about it really hard by the way does kaze have buring soul and clear mind

i thought it be cool parodox's deck is cool u have to admit

hey i'm just throwing this out but what if kaze had parodox's deck

nevermind

what do you mean far from over

wow you made this duel look easy

The love triangle is getting intense XD