it was very sweet , i love it ! you should continue to write fictions on them !

I liked it. nice and succinct.

great story, i loved it.

Hi!

Short but gets to the passion between Hal and Carol. Nice to know there's room for something else in his life other than duty. :)

Thanks for sharing! Do write more about them!

I really loved what you have written here. Please write more about Hal and Carol... pretty please? Continue or even a new story? There isn't a whole lot out there yet...Thank you for writing this. I can't wait to read more. *Hint Hint*