This was amazing it really kept with the tone of the novel. But you gave it all your own amazing twists.

Very much enjoyed reading your story!

That was so great! I love the surprise ending. Thank you for sharing the story. Was very in depth and I liked so much of it. How do you think it could be shorter, and a little more attention to phrases not said 200 years ago. Thanks again for sharing!

Wow that was so great.

Oh that was sooo good! And so heartbreaking!

I appreciate your story! You seemed interested in constructive criticism... some of the dialog lately has become a little unlikely. Like them betting on the way to rescue Georgie. Seeing Richard eating a sandwich after Darcy and his sister make it inside from this horrid ordeal is way beyond likely. He would have been out the door chasing Younge down don’t you think? Anyway, I’m seeing more of that and it’s making the story less enjoyable.

There are a few phrases that jolt me out of the story because they are modern (eg no problem). Also, Bingley seems a little too selfish at the end here.

Oh my! This was definitely hard to read. Well down though. I’m glad Jane and Charlotte stood by her. To improve writing I would suggest shorter storytelling.

I am loving your story, but all the missing or mixed up words are distracting.

A lot of this chapter felt like excessive detail.

Uh oh. I feel a disastrous proposal coming. Loving your story. Thank you.

Damn it Lizzy! You dumb b***h! So much for her wits!

OH. MRS. BENNET IS A HEEEEELLL.
DAMNIT. OHHEELLL. MRS. BENNET IS SO STUPID! HELL

It is so sad...

ohmygod...