This was really good, started out a little dark, but really wound up being a great story.

You really bring out this couple in a very different way, and give them a unique and fiery spark that a decent number of writer's for this couple don't, especially lately, so pretty please comeback and write more for this couple, believe me after some recent stories involving this couple extreme damage control is desperately needed from good writer's like yourself.

I love the tone you had set at the beginning, how incorporeal the women felt - more like passing shadows and how Rin feels like a voyeur there when really, she's the only one welcomed in that house. The only uncharacteristic part is how Sesshoumaru would put her room in sight of these women when realistically if he were to ever do this, he would at least ensure she would not bear witness to it. (Although for plot's sake, I understand why you did that.)

The transformation of their relationship was impressive, I have to say. Usually it takes chapters upon chapters to make such a shift convincing but it takes a certain level of finesse to be able to truncate that into a few thousand words AND make it persuasively feasible. Bravo - the gradual crumbling of Sesshoumaru's walls and his stubbornness to the very end, when he wouldn't even tell her the real reason for making her stay in bed were all so very him.

Wow! I really really liked this story! It was an excellent writing and also a really good characterization of Rin and Sesshomaru. I particularly liked that Shesshomaru didn't let Rin kneel before his room like he did with the other females. Just right then we knew he loved her!

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i will always, repeatedly, come back to this story..

I adore this! All the feels, I went from worried to sad to happy. Thanks so much for sharing!

the feeling hits me lyk a truck lmao...

Wow I absolutely loved reading this story! It was so full of suspense! I was wondering if Rin was pregnant when Sesshomaru began acting "clingy" lol. It was also endearing in it's own sense and funny reading the way Sesshomaru was trying to fight or understand his feelings for Rin as they developed. Rin taking that bold step most definitely worked out for the best and certainly in both their favors. Great job!

This was powerful. I was so worried for Rin. Like the say "desperate time calls for desperate measures" . She did it and was rewarded greatly. You are a very good writer. I hope to read more from you. I have started some of your stories. Take care.

One year ago reading this i was like "aww Sess is so cute" but now i reread this again and i have to stop reading for like 2-3 times to take a deep breath, the feels just hits me like train...

I never get tired reading this. Loved it. :-)

This was really good. I loved this story. Wished you would write more of this pairing.

ZOMG! This is the most romantic, cutest, and sweetest story ever! I cried cause it was so beautiful. So I wanted to take my time and acknowledge what a wonderful one-shot this is. I am truly pleased to the tips. Haha anyway great job! Everything was in character. It was perfect! And Sesshy's stubborn love was just the perfect title for this fic!

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This is so cute in a so weird way. I fucking love it.