I think this story would be better if Tai Lung was used in place of Shen, as Po treated his fight with Shen with much more solemnity and remorse than he did with Tai Lung.

But other than that, this is perhaps your best story.

jeje si cuando no quieres pelear es duro y se que se siente cuando te intimidan pero también cuando tienes el poder de dañar a aquellos que te lastimaron es algo bastante atrayente pero po si que tenía buenas inteciones y tigresa jeeje allí estaba para dar ayuda y bueno torturar un poquito a po

It was very good!

This might be the best KFP fic I've read so far. It captured the characters perfectly and was sweet without being over the top.

buaaa solo entendi algunas líneas odio no saber inglés y los traductores son una cochinada

no es ironico que po tenga como maestra favorita a tigresa y que luego se hiciera tan unida aa el me pregunto como haran los creadores para juntar a estos dos bueno en las leyendas chinas esta el tigre y el dragón peroo como se juntaran estos dos o no haa

This is great if you ask me. The characters and scenes really remind me of the canon movies and that's not something I can say of all fanfiction. good or bad. Well done. The culmination of Tigress' frustration is great, I can really see the "irritated comment, attack, irritated comment, attack..." that you describe.

You have some clunky wordings here and there, particularly when you describe people and surroundings and imply emotions. Sometimes your metaphors works really well, and other times I actually get confused about what you mean or just go "I don't think that's how you use that word". The fact that I really enjoyed this despite it sometimes needing a little too much deciphering is a testament to your impressive grasp of characters and their movements and action. It could use some work though, if you ask me.

very sweet i enjoyed it

This was sweet and well written. Very nicely done.

I am a bit surprised there was no mention of Tai Lung... but considering that Po's problem was that he felt good after Shen's death, I'm guessing that he didn't feel good after beating Tai Lung?

Regardless, I very much enjoyed it. Now I have to go attack whatever other KFP stories you have... after I'm done procrastinating.

This was wonderful!

Very nice. I liked that, it was a very good story. It could either be buddy-buddy or more-than-buddy - more-than-buddy (wink). I love your idea of how he doesn't like to hurt people like that, it totally makes sense. Good job.

I really liked it! It was a cute story, and you did a good job with it. :)

lovely, great story. i'd hope to know what happend the enxt morning or something. anyways, it was, three words, b-a-d, i guess thats one word, bad as in totally awesome. to use po's words for a description.

nice work.

Oh mah golly! DAT WAS GREAT! you captured the emotions so well! i love it all!

I like the story

It's good that you are sticking more to the movie on the friendship/love thing in between Po and Tigress. It makes it so much easier to read.

Can't wait for the next chapter!