So I guess this story is abandoned right? And mind if I use the name Richard Gawkins? That name is too good to be used only once you know.

But where did the angels in Hell get the materials to make their technology?

This is interesting. You are talented writer. Still, I have feeling that Lucy isn't so truthful and benign. Grey vs gray morality stories are best!
Btw, angels are genderless spirits. They can take form of both genders.

I can't believe I'm about to say this,but this story is actually pretty good. This story,along with Twilight the Christ,and a few of your Pokemon stories,are the only ones that I actually like from you,and I'm a Catholic. I imagine that this takes place in an alternate universe. A role reversal,if you will. I'm actually considering of writing a story similar to this,except the rating will be rated either K or K plus,and it actually will take place in an alternate universe. Anyway,I hope you continue this story,and may God have mercy on your soul.

This was brilliant. I loved it.

Was this inspired by Pharyngula, by any chance? I ask this because this story is becoming quite similar to what someone commented on Pharyngula in response to Anthony Horvath's short story, "Richard Dawkins Goes To Heaven". I must say, I'm intrigued. I know that atheists tend to interpret God as evil and Satan as good, but this is the first I've ever read a fictional story incorporating those things. It has all the tropes: the opponents of God being freethinking secular humanists, hell actually being a nice place, God being the embodiment of all that is wrong with humanity, and so forth. So I hope you have not stopped writing this.

It is quite histerical to read and I hope the authur wrote this for laughs. The suggestion of the aspects of God are pretty much made up way out side biblical teachings. Firstly there is a hell in this which is actually never mentioned in the bible and God is apparerntly hates certain humans which is always good to know.

This is very entertaining so far...will be looking forward to reading more...

I'd like to ask if you're just writing this as a fic, or if you're trying to actually make a point that you believe God is this way. Because, you know, I'm trying to acknowledge that one MIGHT not actually be trying to "make us think." Maybe-just maybe?-not everyone who writes Bible fanfiction is trying to convince us on their view of our Father in Heaven.

Unless you are, Jeuxdevie. But that's my question, anyway.

It was really funny to see some of the reviewers casually defending God, as well. I feel fond of you, you guys.

Anyways, good writing. Don't really care on the intention behind your writing (though I am a loyal Christian), but you're doing a good clean job.

I am officially saddened that I ever doubted you! This is nothing short of brilliance! Please update soon!

~Strawbaby Chick

. . . . I'm starting to like this story. . . I love the thought that seems to have been put into this

~Strawbaby Chick

Richard is being the sensible person here. This God you have created is absolutely horrid and atheists aren't like that at all

~Strawbaby Chick

This is completely fascinating. If God really is like Yahweh, then sign me up for Hell! You really have a talent for making people think. Can't wait to see where this story goes! Update soon please!

This is completely fascinating. If God really is like Yahweh, then sign me up for Hell! You really have a talent for making people think. Can't wait to see where this story goes! Update soon please!

While yes this is not true at all I still enjoyed reading it. See it would make sense but the whole thing is that God gave all of us free will so he wouldn't try & make people slaves. If he didn't give us free will & didn't want us to have it then the Devil could not have had that kind of mindset. The Devil I believe wanted all the glory & the praise and was being selfish. He was not realizing just how much he should be thankful that he was created & able to live in such a wonderful home. Of course, this is all just my opinion though. Have a nice day & God bless :D