This was a cute little piece. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I liked the interaction between Konoka and Setsuna. It was very heartfelt.

please make more

That was so sweet Riri-chan ;_; I haven't read a good KonoSetsu fic in a looong time! Thank you for writing it! :3

I find the whole tradition that Setsuna's in so sad at times, I'm just happy in this fic she finds peace (in Konoka~~ 3)

Anyways, I hope that the next thing you write, is as good as this ;)

-Nanoha-san

That was so incredibly sweet! I really like how you made Konoka aggressive, but also let her break down. Also, for Setsuna, I'm glad that you made her so in character.

Ending felt super right, too. I can't explain it, but it felt right. Almost like it would actually happen in Negima. XD

Thanks for the great read,

Co426e (Vanui)

Beautiful.

:3

aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww~

that was so cute!

I loved it! A for you

Love it!It was so cute and awesome I think it was funny but sweet I thought it funny how setsuna was trying to still lie after she got found out and also how Asuna and them come out of no where like story of the White Crow and Black Dove was so cute and kind of sad it made me want to cry a I loved it as soon as I knew it was a up the awesome work and hope to read more stories like take to long you Hear well Read :P

I loved it. It was cute. You used the "blue haired girl" thing to describe Setsuna a little too much, but the story itself was great! And kudos to your proof reader. Keep writing, you're awesome. DK

that was a sweet one!

Rare to find good KonoSetsu fanfic these days, but you made it happen haha.

Good job!

The fact that this is KonoSetsu makes this fic already a WIN!

I like the white crow and black dove story.. Very fascinatin still love how Setsuna is just so tease-able whenever she's with Konoka. And I love how Konoka teases Setsuna at every possible opportunity!

Wings.. Are definitely one way of making Setsuna wiggly all over lol... Especially if it's Konoka caressing them! o v o !

So much stutters for Setsuna~ Good job Konoka xDD Do more of your epic poses lolol and let's all watch Setsuna explode and die of flustered-ness lol

Also... Last but not the least... Asuna! Nice timing! Lol! You made the two act all ninja-like and stuffs xDD