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The Ghostly Minion chapter 6 . 9/10 I loved the wedding, but even more for the settling of Ron and Ginny’s hash. The male Weasleys stepped up like you’d imagine them to do. I’ve a feeling that H&H will have to handle Molly personally. Can you imagine what their children will be like? TGM |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13 The amount that it actually comes to is 533,000,000. The amount needs to be changed. |
LunaM303 chapter 22 . 5/1 that was a great story |
Pixie8859 chapter 1 . 3/13 Okay, yes there are errors, but look at them in a way to add to the story. Some of the misspellings are quite funny. Just read it or not, the choice is yours. But don't get all bent up about commas, apostrophes; life's too short |
LavishlyUrs chapter 1 . 2/9 ignore all the rude reviews. just continue writing. the more you write the better you will get. one thing I learned is that the ones that review are some that haven't written a fanfic themselves. so keep you head up and keep writing and remember as long as your fanfic gets across to some readers that's enough. |
Realmsmith chapter 1 . 8/6/2019 please get a beta writer, grammarly, or some form of spellcheck. |
GRANDJEDIMASTER110 chapter 2 . 4/13/2019 Your math was wrong it’s 533,000,000 gallons |
Realmsmith chapter 2 . 4/13/2019 150 125 128 130 _ 533 where the hell did you get 398 from |
AbandonedPlay chapter 2 . 4/10/2019 The total is 533,000,000 not 398,000,000 galleons |
cas6039 chapter 2 . 3/14/2019 Did Gringotts just forgive the damage done when Harry & Hermione grabbed the Hufflepuff Horcrux from the Lestrange vault and used a dragon to escape? |
Guest chapter 7 . 3/7/2019 Nothing much, just noting Hermione's name would bee Hermione Potter nee Granger, not the other way around. This way it reads, Hermione Potter, born as Granger, instead of Hermione Granger, born as Potter. |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2018 Way too over the top OOC for the Weasleys. They have sufficient character flaws without making them into caricatures. |
Kai chapter 2 . 10/7/2018 Funny how the Hogwarts founders are "the 4 most famous magical figures in history". Just because they founded a provincial school of magic somewhere in the sticks of the most remote part of a barbaric island at the edge of the world. Somehow I can't really believe that. Weren't there important magicians in Mesopotamia? In Ancient Egypt? China? India? The Roman Empire? In the Americas (at least the part where writing was used to preserve names and events, such as Aztec Mexico)? |
Kai chapter 1 . 10/7/2018 It's the other way around: the Weasels have several life debts to pay to Harry, at least Ginevra (diary), Ronald (mead) and Arthur (snake). If you don't count that Harry saved the whole school in 1993, when the basilisk easily could have walked into the Great Hall at dinner and killed everyone. Which would mean additional life debts for the five youngest Weasel-kids. |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/2/2018 I FUCKING HATE THIS SHIT STORY |