Reviews for Lily's Defender
ayame992 chapter 46 . 7/9
How many times will they learn Accio? Lily uses it in first year when Mary steals her review sheets. I recall they learned it again later, and now is the trid time... But this is just a little thing i noticed. Please don't take it as real crotic, couse there is hardly anything one can complayin about in this story.
I really like the whole fic, the story, the ideas, and the style you both write in. I have read more fic from Snapegirlkmf and I know, that anything she writes bound to be one of the best stories I ever read. First rate quality really. I have a feeling that I will check out your profile too to what other stories you have.
excessivelyperky chapter 66 . 5/27
Excellent chapter. Well, anything that makes James' face fall is cool with me...
Ravenclaw-Slytherin-Erudite chapter 1 . 4/10
I can't believe you did that to poor little Sev!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/18
This story and the i’m Amazed story are great au stories to read. I feel for Severus and lily though in this story
Severus because his parents died and he’s a great kid despite losing his parents so young and being targeted by the three lion stooges
Lily because her fears are being broadcast school wide for someone to target her.
While Mcgonagall and a select few others are trying to be fair and unbiased Dumbledore and Professor Hardbroom need to learn to stop kissing a stooges ass so much.
excessivelyperky chapter 65 . 2/23
Great spells at the dueling contest-and after, too. I expect Severus doesn't need a Levicorpus to float after that kiss.

But the Prophet is going to bleed red ink once Gold is done with them. If they're lucky.
Beauty Eclipsed chapter 69 . 1/30
Loved the plot!
excessivelyperky chapter 64 . 1/10
Nice to see that Albus has finally given up on James (what a pity he didn't feel the same way in canon).

Yes, Gold was nice about it, but he's only been there the one year-Minerva's been there since the beginning and saw all the chances Albus gave James, even with other people were hurt.

What a contrast to canon where everyone seemed to be ok with James and his buddies...and this contrast I enjoy very much. Granted, it helps that Severus is from a rich family now-alas, that kind of thing really does make a difference.
excessivelyperky chapter 63 . 12/23/2019
I think James Potter will soon discover that Professor Gold's office have some very interesting wards to keep people out of it...
excessivelyperky chapter 62 . 11/8/2019
I think Charles is an idiot, someone's going to hand James his rear end a *second* time. Rosier was an idiot, too, but not as much of one.

I just bet that Slytherin House meeting is going to *special*.
brightflare chapter 70 . 9/15/2019
Excellent story!
excessivelyperky chapter 61 . 9/3/2019
Sigh-entitled pureblood brats gonna pureblood, apparently. Sirius learned better, but James never will unless his parents grow up first.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/17/2019
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Mainaru974 chapter 16 . 7/30/2019
God I hate James potter's parents so much.
MegK1978 chapter 70 . 7/29/2019
This was awesome, and so unlike any AU I've ever read. You've essentially turned the entire Wizarding World as we know it on its head, and I enjoyed every chapter!
I especially enjoyed the tweaks you made to Snape's family history, that his parents loved each other and the elder wasn't so demeaning of magic.
Looking forward to Alethea's continuation of the story, and whatever you come up with in the Mischief Brigade and your other continuing stories.
Mainaru974 chapter 4 . 7/26/2019
F**k you dumbledore
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