Simply beautiful

Got to be Amrothos

I feel even better that the rat bastard got his due. This is all unfolding so well.

Okay, I haven't read the chapter yet and won't be able to review it after I do, but your intro is SO compelling I just had to mention it!

Eomer really is the gentleman in this group. I love how you are characterizing him.

I really enjoyed this story, thanks for all your hard work.
I love your Eomer, if he was not already taken I would snatch him up in a heart beat ;)
Now on to the next installment of this series.

Rain Astiel

I particularly enjoyed how you included the catching and cooking of seafood - it was fun and delicious.

Oh, that was absolutely wonderful and I loved it so much! Thank you so much for writing this!

Wow the tension in this chapter was so intense ! They will doubtless have an enjoyable happy marriage haha.

A well written piece I thoroughly enjoyed. The instant chemistry and rapid but solid development of trust is nice to observe. Thanks for another good masterpiece!

I haven't even finished reading this chapter but I must leave a review before I forget and rush to read the next chapter. The previous chapters were funny in their innuendos, but this chapter with the cauldron analogy is quite deep and beautiful! It is so true and well done. Such rich description could only be based on your own life's lessons! :) Happy to read a solid writing about a solid view of marriage!

After binge reading, another review is due. I did not review the previous few chapters not because I didn't want to review them but rather I did not want an interruption to my train of imagination. Personally, I am not entirely undestanding how two young people can instantly fall in love in a day, but oh well that is said to happen in real life too so I will accept that. :P I am pleased to see them being open to each other fully and avoid any misunderstanding at the beginning of their betrothal. It is fitting also that a war hero and war hero's daughter would unite and fall in love after a successful campaign against an evil from the past. Eowyn and Faramir are my favourite couple in the LotR fanfic, but I am starting to become fond of Eomer and Lothiriel through the Choppy Waters ;)

The amount of research that surely went into add in all these nautica details definitely deserve much respect. This is why I delight in your story : solid descriptions that make fantasy more real than real life! I have no knowledge of sailing whatsoever but your Fanfiction transports me straight to the ocean with the horselord and the two recklessly lovable children of Imrahil :) thanks for your reply as well!

The discussion of cultural differences and the innocent-ish talk of child birth between Eomer and Lothiriel is adorable. Knowing that they will marry each other, it is intriguing to watch how their so-far acquaintance stage goes :)

I had an awful experience of kicking a sea urchin in Hawaii and the smaller spikes you are actually recommended to keep in your foot so that you don't get infection. Rather you leave it in your foot and the protein spikes from sea urchins just dissolve into your body over a couple weeks... :P

This light hearted beachside outing is nice! :) I like these peaceful scenes being played out in the Middle Earth. Long live the peace of the fourth age!

Hallo Ms Thanwen! Happy new year ! :)
After some hiatus from Fanfiction world of the LotR, I decided to pick up your Eomer stories (as is my habit to do after doing a LotR Marathon during Christmas vacation) As expected, your pieces of writing are consistently good and I am pleased and intrigued to start this one :)

Chapter 1 is sufficiently well written and leaves the reader with the suspense for what is to come: could it be a misunderstanding or are these children of Imrahil as bad as they seem to be in their conniving backstabbing comments? I guess I will find out as i keep reading!

Oh and I wish you all the best in the new year and good luck the other new piece that you are writing about Rohan.