Great beginning.

Hi! I'm a super big fan of this story and your writing. I just have a few concerns. Well, one major one really. I'm sure you are, but you're aware that Jesse is a textbook case of a manipulative, abusive boyfriend, right? I love Rachel and that you've made her so strong and independent, but I know there are stories that portray Rachel in the same way and then have her stay with/go back to her abuser. I really hope that's not what you plan for this story. That being said, I've no real right to tell you how to write your story and I really am a fan, so I hope I didn't offend.

ohmygosh! can't wait to read another chapter, so drama-filled. i hope she stays with jesse.

Hope Jesse doesn't guilt her it of calling Noah again.

Please, tell me you are going to update soon! .
I love your fic!

Oooh cant wait for more :) Thanks for updating!

Great chapter.

I hate how crazy jesse is getting since i really do like him! puck was out of line.

So pumped you didn't abandon this story! There is a lot they have to work through and I'm curious how they can progress. Please, come back with the next chapter ASAP! I hope your life calmed down so you can relax and continue here on this site.

I'm still shock that Noah's rachel's ex. O_O

Update update update update! :)

I loved to read this different chapter ! It was good to know Puck thinking :) I can't wait to read the next chapter

great chapter again !

I find it hard to root for them when Jesse is this controlling about every little thing Rachel does.

Amazing chapter again ! Jesse really starts to getting ... scary ... I have the feeling Rachel is afraid. It's so interesting to read and ... I really can't wait to know how they'll fix this problem :)

It was good to read you :)

This chapter was maybe the best ! Looking forward to reading the next chapter