| Reviews for Layers of the Onion |
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   Iggy3802 chapter 13 . 2/4/2018 Great story, are you planning on completing it? |
| PAM H chapter 6 . 8/1/2017 I ENJOY JUST READING THE STORIES. I DON'T CRITIQUE THEM. MAY I SAY, I'M REALLY ENJOYING THIS STORY ! |
| PAM H chapter 1 . 7/31/2017 EXCELLENT STORY ! |
| anne1585 chapter 13 . 4/9/2017 This is a great story. Please, please could you continue this, it the best one i've read in a long time |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/26/2017 Just a little heads up that Espo stated in a episode(I can't remember wich one) that he was a Army Ranger |
| WayofLife4587 chapter 13 . 7/28/2016 Are you going continue the story or what? |
| silentshutters chapter 13 . 5/14/2016 Any updates to this. I would love for this story to follow through to the end. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 He went to college beforehand so he wouldn't be a Corporal |
| Le.gnome.DB chapter 13 . 10/7/2015 Bonjour, avez vous l'intention de terminer votre histoire car celle est vraiment très intéressante et je souhaiterais vraiment connaitre la suite .merci d'écrire de telle histoire |
| Guest chapter 13 . 6/29/2015 I always loved this story I really wish I could finish it please still a big fan either way Serenity |
| tom chapter 3 . 6/15/2015 Sad to see that this story was left to feature in it's incompleteness. Great start and the storyline was showing great talent for both story and character development. Alas it seems as though the parent has abandoned its child. |
| tom chapter 12 . 3/27/2015 Why rate "M" then write separate page with "m" content, defeats purpose of rating. |
| teazer chapter 8 . 1/24/2015 BAMF castle (Rogers) is just too cool. |
| Mitana chapter 13 . 1/1/2015 Just read through the first 13 chapters of this and really enjoyed it. Are you going to continue? |
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/29/2014 Espo was a Army Ranger not a Marine |
