This was amazing. The slight dark tone to Shawn's thoughts about possessing Gus was an awesome touch.

Shawn obsessing over "his" Gus acceptable would make a great story of an evil shawn keeping Gus to himself but your fic was awesome just enough of everything. Last three lines makes the story. Good staying in character portrayal of shawn and Gus done well

i love

Wow, It Went From Being All 'Shawn's Jealous, How Cute,' To 'Shawn's Sabotaging Gus's Life & Is Happy To Comfort The Pain He Caused.'

It Kinda Makes Shawn Seem Like He's Got Hero Syndrome: Causing Pain So He Can Heal It.

But I Liked It Nonetheless, Very Well Written. X3

wow this was really good. though i wish it was longer though, you know. I can totally see shawn being obsessed with gus in this way. Keep it up~Samsal

Oh and p.s. you do Gus just fine so dont worry about it )

That was great! Awesome on the angst factor! you know the horrific lack of Shus is absolutely sad. especially from shawns pov. thank you for adding it :D

thats exactly what Shawn feels. its totally his voice. well done

Oh no Shawn got upset at the thought of loosing Gus.

Great story