This chapter ending was pretty dumb

Dumbledore is a bastard. At best, a dementia plagued incompetent, but probably a manipulative reprobate with slight sadistic leanings.

This is stupid. I keep waiting for him to take the SIMPLE solution and turn someboy into a toad, the SECOND spell he did accidentally just by saying the word, but he doesn't.

This was an interesting and confusing story for me. I enjoyed it and intend to read the sequel, and perhaps read some of the background materials for whatever fandom this was crossed with .

Thanks for writing this and sharing this here.

haryy strong but have a weak personality what a trash tsk tsk

hi, i really like your storyline, but would just like to point out that there are several facts you have wrong in your Indian mythology part.

Vishnu was the first of the gods to be created. a lotus bloomed from his navel, and from the lotus, Brahma came out. Also, Shiva does not have more than 1 head, although he has 3 eyes. And he's not blue, only his throat is, hence he's called Neelkanth (blue-throated).

i truly don't mean to disrespect you, it just rankles me to see my history and mythology being said wrong...

Good one!

Aaaaaaaannnnnddddd that's a wrap. Yeah - I'd say I got to about, let's say roughly, the third line (?) of this chapter before I couldn't take it anymore. The Summary and First Chapter hooked my attention but nearly everything after seemed to fall flat and completely fail to retain my interest. One thing I enjoyed was the concept of Ravenclaws being able to design their rooms; apart from that, I would say this first quarter of the fanfiction failed in critical areas to be enjoyable to read. Seriously. Inventing lore to allow you to write-off Harry being unable to use wand is sooooooooo goddamn lame. Interesting premise, boring and off-putting execution. Better luck next time.

Nice Wicked reference

Good!

Hinduism is really monotheistic polymorphism. The different gods that devotees pray to can be likened to facets of one God that we call Brahman. To call Hinduism polytheistic is failing to give it the deeper understanding it deserves, especially if you are going to use its beliefs for your artistic liberties. I don't mind reading well researched stories using my faith. I mind when people zealously borrow snippets from them for the sole purpose of making a more exotic story.

Interesting chapter!

Interesting beginning!

if you make him anything like he is in the books you are crazy

ARE You KIDDING ME . you are crazy