Perfect.

Wow... this is just so brilliant it took me a few days to be able to gather my wits and write a coherent review for it. The descriptions take you to another place, makes you feel the power and sex in the air. The way the Dothraki are portrayed is beautiful, how very in tone with the nature they are and I love how Dany has also given into her instincts in abandonment. I also love Drogo, who just sits there and watches her, like the mighty Khal that he is, leaning forward a bit in anticipation and when she comes to him, he takes her without a word because he already told everything with his eyes, what need are words? Dammit, I love this so very much!

Now, I'll just think the two of them kept on dancing forever and none of the sad stuff ever happened :'(

You're an awesome writer :)

Could you not

I think you truly captured the spirit of the Dothraki people. They are so free, natural, and (because of this) beautiful. Your descirptions of Dany's movements were extremely poignant - everything was so real and believable. The interaction between Drogo and Dany was sexy, and yet written in a refreshingly tasteful way.

It would have been interesting to explore Dany's sense of identity here, as she has obviously changed a lot since she has chosen to integrate with the Dothraki people. As the Khaleesi she does things she would never have dared in her past life and it would make sense for her to experience some inner conflict trying to reconcile the two sides of her self. Just a thought :)

Really good job on this. I look forward to reading more from you.

wow, that was really good. I love this pairing!

This was very ... just wow! I loved it! Especially: iShe cries out again, and she knows who she is worshipping. She is worshipping the drum, the ground, the very air around her. She is worshipping the unnamed gods. She is worshipping her body. She is worshipping everything and nothing./i

That was just about my thoughts watching the party scenes myself...Oh wow...

powerful, rich and wild like the Dothraki

:)