Wow! Stalker songs and stories so rock! XD I loved it! It was really original and, frankly, oddly humorous in some places because of how much watching Pietro has become Evan's life, as is duly noted in the fic. It was very neat, personally I think you should add a few more lines with the drink, hehe maybe with Evan fondling it or running his finger along the rim, simply because that would be totally weird to see. Yet it seems to match in my mind. Oh well though, this story was really cool, and had one of those rare happy/sad endings. Very well done!

AND I read 'Simple Love with a Complicated Touch'! That story was so neat! You write masochism so well! I can't believe FF took it off. Geez, that really sucks. But, I guess I can review it here. It was kewl, though I think Herm's and Ron's reactions to finding Harry and Draco was... umm... well, a bit unrealistic. But perhaps I should read the books more. I'd imagine someone finding their friend like that would be freaking out more. Oh well though. Still awesome with the tough love! And of course, the sex scenes... WOW. Hehe, not intense enough to let you forget the whole pain/pleasure game going on. Very nicely and tactfully done. I mean, its not like you really said any dirty words except for in their dialect, it shouldn't have been taken down. Oh well, not like my opinion will change anything. Another point though was how Harry and Draco seemed to know what each was thinking, constantly. And not just where Harry seemed to accidentally let slip his thoughts out loud. I'm not sure exactly, but something didn't seem quite right in the story. It's just, what they thought each other would do, they did. Oh well, maybe they just know each other so well they can predict what the other will do, as is obliviously evidenced. - I'm not sure what I'm saying either -_-;

Any who, excellent work. Quite a funny start, I loved that. Man though, abusive as hell. XD Must be why it was taken down, people don't want to believe such relationships really exist.

Wonderful writings, love your work!

XOXO

O THAT WAS NEAT!~_~

*Claps* I applaude you. NOBODY has ever made me feel even the slightest bit of sympathy towards that spikey little brat in my entire life. Until now.

I'll be totally honest with you. I HATE Evan with the passion. Dunno why, he just grates on me like a pain in the arse. But whilst reading this fic, this wondeful, fabtabulous, fic, I actually went "aw." So I applaud you! You rock my socks!

Totally loved that last bit with Lance and Pietro in the jeep. As a die hard Lietro fan, I read it over about 20 times lol.

The song fits fantastically. I didn't think it would at first, but I HAD to read the fic, simply because

a) I love Pietro/Lance

b) I love Darren Hayes

and c) It was R rated *Singgers. Shifty eyes*

I beg you, PLEASE do another chapter! I've never begged someone to do another chapter to Evietro fiction before, but this time I'm on my knees!

Love ya!

Lavender

i loved it, basicall you rock

aw poor Evan... he's so sad... *sniffles* it's really good it brought me to tears...

-Grinning.- Okay, I have found a new favorite coupling! Evietro...Mwahahahaha! At least it's better than Remy x Rogue...-Gag.- I don't know what the hell went through my head watching that stupid episode...Anyway, I enjoyed this even though it was strange and Evan was a stalker...o.o;

Hey, that was great. i loved it. byes now!

~Suraka-chan~

Ok, that was weird... I was singing that song in my head and saw it on here too OH MY GOD! We must have twin vibes! Are you a fan of Darren hayes? I love him! Only second to Justin Timberlake, he is GOD.

Please write another chapter! Oh and another chapter to you Pietro/Wanda fic too! That one is brilliant!

Taz

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Good story though I would have never have thought of Evan as a stalker! Write more!

*snort* Poor Evan...

Ok, not really. I mean, hell, he got to see Pie naked. *pokes Evan roughly* Isn't that enough for you?

... I get carried away with myself sometimes. I loved this. It's wonderful, as is all your other work.

Poor Evan...So sad...Good though! Keep writing! _

Woah, interesting. Very different, I loved it!

It didn't suck. Good stuff, even if slash isn't my usual cup of tea. Well written, like all of your work. Keep up the good work.

i have a thing about songfics- i tend to hate them. because people rely on the song so much, they don't realize that -we're- not there, listening to the same music. but you SO didn't do that. every single line you wrote held everything it needed. even though i'm sure there has to be SOMETHING you could improve on, i'm not seeing it. this is great. i can understand evan's frustration as he indulges in what he knows is wrong, but can’t help, and you managed to get that in there in ... what? four words? great, great, great job. loves it.