Aw sweet!

Sweet and not so long as to become unbearable. Well done. Not my thing normally, but with all the grimdarks in PM fiction, it was a nice change.

Madoka is such a showoff ;)

Awwwww this is soooo cute! I love fics like this, keep up the good work! -

A very nice sweet shot. This is badly needed here in Madoka's ff section. And this made my day. :D I can't say more than enough how truly good this is. Makes me happy inside.

I'm imagining Madoka's Valhalla, and every puella magi are there, having the time of their afterlife. XDD

Thank you for the good read!

Short and sweet. :D

Nice cute uncomplicated story on Homura and Madoka :)

There just need to be more of them fics like this! XD

What a beautiful read, and certainly very refreshing from the more serious stories that you have ongoing. You put a lot of detail in describing their dresses and I liked that (I think Homura's surpasses Madoka, save for the cosmic skirt). Madoka's entrance and the way she slowly took her time to scan the crowd was a good way to hold the reader's breath.

I really enjoyed the dance between Homura and Madoka, but I was disappointed because it was too short. A little dialogue here and there and a bit more description of how Homura felt, or how their dance went, would be nice. The story wrapped up in a heartwarming way that made me smile. Great work!