I love this !

B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L :')

Oh so sweet, poor Riven! What a horrible thing for a child to go through. I think your right about Nabu's death but anyway loved it

That's odd because I thought the dream sequence was the best part of this story. During that section, I had this epic image in my mind of city life mixed with nature. Wish that image could become my wallpaper.

Anyways, onto the real review. This really was very comprehensive. Riven and Musa are practically fated for each other. I really enjoyed the beginning showing the kid version of Riven. I would have loved if the show integrated this background of Riven into the show, but of course, the show is kid friendly, so I doubt they would do that. That's how much I loved it.

Beautiful,absolutely beautiful! ;) ;)

wow that was amzing

Honestly that was GREAT, of course there were things that not all lot of people would agree about, but who cares this is fanfiction its our world to create and you did a fine job :D

OMG i loved it. It was so sweet and romantic.

I think I just died. This is badass! I L-O-V-E it! The emotions were established so clearly and I could picture it! I just loved it, especially the sentence it ended on and the fact that their dreams related, and the kisses, and the ring and most importantly, the story! Tell Marty that it was a great plot and tell yourself that it was written brilliantly! *Favouriting*

Xxx

Awwww... such a wonderful story... btw... just to let you know. Nabu didn't actually die, turns out that he was in a coma. So that's why We saw him in the 2nd movie of Winx club.