Awww, love how they had Nathan. So cute! And I am glad that they got a chance to be normal parents to Melody/River. They were cheated no matter what River said. Your story does explain her personality much better too.

Beautiful.

Oh, this was wonderful! I really, really enjoyed it! You did a great job balancing out all the sad parts with the humorous parts. I loved that Amy and Rory had a son, and I loved that the Doctor popped in to see teenaged River before going to find baby Melody. And the Doctor's persistent inability to keep accurate time was a nice touch. XD

Well done!

Wow! That was so very great! Loved it!

Wow! That was so very great! Loved it!

Fantastic!

This was really great.

I think this is my favourite fic I've ever read. I'm being totally serious. Had me in tears.

I loved everything about it. Everything.

Oh my fucking god. Wow. I don't think I could ever compliment this story enough, particularly as I'm currently incoherent with the amazingness of this fic - so I apologise in advance. But truly, this was ridiculously good, and realistic, and I vaguely hope that this will happen in the show because it's so good, but also not because it's just heartbreaking.

Firstly, your emotion was incredibly good. Everybody acted realistically, with Rory going back to work and Amy mourning over Melody and the Doctor disappearing and the whole paradox with River in the beginning was heartbreaking yet so in character for everyone.

You also have this really amazing writing style where all of your descriptions are simply and lovely at the same time. I could picture everything perfectly, especially when you were describing Melody's first four years. My favourite would have to be the bit where Melody gets taken and the Doctor comes back for Rory and Amy, just because of how everything has carried over; Dr Fish Fingers and everything being "cool" and everything else you put in there or previously, like Rory the Roman and the boy who waited and your little touch about Rory's dreams was fantastic and so realistic.

Anyway, I really need to stop rambling and I'm sorry if that made no sense. I'm just completely in awe over this fic. Ultimately, this was just lovely. Please write more.

Urgh, I can't stop crying! Wow, that was... wow! Amazing, so amazing. And they had another baby! I love it!

The part about Rory finally realizing that Leadworth did, indeed, have a supermarket was funny. I'm glad that Amy and Rory at least got some time with Melody before she was taken again but now the Doctor can't come back and save her until she's at the very least almost fourteen. That's a long time to go without her. I wonder if the Ponds were traveling with the Doctor all that time.

That was absolutely fantastic! I love your characterizations. Rory made me smile :) Great job!

Oh this was absolutely wonderful, great follow-up to A Good Man Goes To War. Fabulously written :)

This was fantastic! I think you balanced the amount of humour, angst, and tragedy just right. What a terrible way of living for Rory and Amy, to know that they'll only have a limited amount of time with their little girl before she's snatched away again. But luckily the Doctor managed to find her again in the end :)

I adore this. I love that you also gave them a son. (And Nathan is such a cute name!)

This is good! I really liked this :)