I loved the story! Thumbs up!

Update soon please! Such a good story and great writing style

I really enjoyed your startup - one of the better Paul/Rachel fics I've read! Kudos to you - hope you update soon. Happy writing :)

I'm pretty surprised Paul stayed away from Rachel for that long... Any particular reason? Also, I can't remember from the books, did Jake know about Paul imprinting on his sister before he ran away?
Why hasn't she been told about the wolves, yet? Wouldn't she have a right to know, being an imprint, Billy's daughter and Jake's sister? I wouldn't be able to deal with all that secrecy!
It is understandable that Rachel wants to put her degree to good use, but I can't see that working out long term, since Seattle is quite a distance away from La Push and Paul can't exactly just up and leave (even if they aren't anywhere near that, yet ;)), can he? What a dilemma!
Loved the chapter! :)

I like it so please update soon ! :D

I like it so please update soon ! :D

oooo I loved the interaction between Paul and Rachel! And the way Rachel is suspicious of Jake, its funny cause we all know what happens next but not how it happens lol

Your way of writing is pretty good, not too long or shabby and not too short that it lacks details, its pretty balanced, so good going. I really enjoyed this FF! :)

Are you gonna carry on with this story? Please...PLEASEEEE do, please tell me your going to write more :D

Update please! This is great!

this story is very entertaining. Rachel is kinda a oc because you don't get much of her character so you get alot of lee-way with her. You did a really good job with the first chapter I can't wait to read more

soo good ;)

WOW that was really good, i really like it and can't wait for more hope u update soon :)))

I loved your story, well your begginig!

I love Rachel and Paul! I really enjoy reading fics about them.

Please update soon!

I am also writing a Rachel and Paul fic if you want to read it.

xoxo

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