This was brilliant! And I could genuinely see them getting together in these kinds of circumstances. You did an incredible job on this story!

Okay holy dooley! That was intense! Nicely written (:

That second to last line. Damn. So hot.

You made me like this threesome. I didn't even think this feat was possible. Congrats 3

That was a very interesting story, and the details were fantastic.

I tip my hat to you, sir! :D

Wow, that was impressive. 0.o I like how it's all three of them, yet Axel and Xion are fighting over Roxas in a weird way. Although I like Xion and Axel too!

This was so wonderful. Very different from anything I've read before. You have such original ideas on where to take characters and how they interact with each other is so pleasing to read.

alzhhkajbsnehwa YES. Oh gosh I've toyed with writing a fic like this for a while. You beat me to it! Lovely, lovely job. I enjoyed this.

Never thought I would read a Axel/Roxas/Xion, as I am an AkuRoku fan, but I really love how you capture their relationship in this fic.. Axel's and Xion's jealousy towards each other, and then sharing Roxas Oh naive Roxas. This fic is really written well :) You might just coax me into reading more Axel/Roxas/Xion

Yummy smut... now I'm thinking dirty things too.

Eeee! I never wanted this to end. It should just go on and on and on about how they all fall in together. :D This is now my personal canon- it happened exactly like this. *nods*

""Afraid I'll steal him away from you?"

"Yes," she says, simply and honestly" - FAVORITE BIT. Oh Xion! 3

Oh god yes. I'm so happy abou this right now. I love how you've created their relationship into both a fight over Roxas and an understanding between Axel and Xion. This fic made me squeal, it's about time that someone wrote some good Axel/Roxas/Xion (and this was fantastic).

The way you write is far past a professional level, between your eloquence with words and gift for characterizations. I really loved this and admire your writing!