Incredibly hot but I have to say I really enjoy this story being about a mission with the side aspect of romance. Like they are focused on what they know best and the romance is just an incidental but natural part of that.

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I'm ready for the sequel of the story! I think Zuko will learn a lot from his uncle and that could give him the information that he wants and seek, but that is his personal quest, as Fire Lord he has other duties to perform and this chapter put it clearly he will be the Fire Lord first, that could be good or bad I'm not totally sure, I hope the sequel could clarify my view of Zuko as leader of the country.

Oh no! Zuko can't really catch a break, even a little one! Still at least he has his friends but he still is not open to the idea of them finding his mother. Can't imagine how this decision will affect Ba Sin Se and the future of the earth kingdom. Maybe the chance will present itself for Zuko at some point, and like he will have the honor to save him mother.

I'm really glad that Zuko and Katara have each other, this is getting really difficult for Zuko, he may look like his father but as Katara said, he is not like him, he will need to see that at some point, I can't say much about this, just that enjoyed it a lot, specially their talk and about their feelings.

Oh goodness this hard! Everyone has a breaking point and Zuko finally gave in, it was too much I even imagined how much pressure and the emotional affect he was having at the moment and it was not good, thank goodness Katara was there, he couldn't handle that alone. So far he hasn't obtained anything he wants and that is frustrating for me, it is like he doesn't have a chance to obtain something, but Zuko is always fighting for what he wants. By the way I hope Ozai get his punishment at some point. Ah Toph thanks you for appearing! Great entrance by the way, it just what they need a little bit of her help and love, she even helped them by telling Hau about them! The spirits bless that girl! Excellent chapter!

I think Chem is playing with fire or in this case with water, maybe he want the best for the fire nation and Ursa, but he could jeopardize the balance they have bring to the world, maybe is not what he wish, but is the best they could have done in three years. At least Zuko and Katara can return but how they will handle this situation is what worries me, they can only trust Cham and that is not good, maybe Iroh can give Zuko an advice about this situation or even the White Lotus!

I'm starting to doubt that Ursa will not appear in thus part of the story, and things got complicated, what is Chem skimming using Katara like that, this could ruin part of the trust they have for each other or their relationship! But I don't know if he wants that, all what he want is Ursa alive and Zuko death.

Although this chapter gave more information of what Chem wants and is willing to do, it didn't feel that the story advanced too much. But is interesting how he plans to use Katara, good luck trying to do that Chem, if Zuko discoveres in any form what Chem intends to do, I doubt that even if he is Ursa's most loyal servant, he will make him pay if he does something to Katara.

I know Chem means well, but his act is getting on my nerves, he is mocking Zuko and Katara too much, what would Ursa think of that, but if they do something to him it could mean they lose a good ally, and I doubt Zuko will trust any other bunty hunter after this experience or any other people who is not close to him, they are practically using them!

Oh God this was good! Even if they didn't make it in time, Zuko and Katara show how strong they are together, even Chem was surprised and humiliated after what Katara did, I bet he didn't suspect she would do that. Now did Chem was aware that Ursa maybe was not there? If he knew someonthig and didn't tell anyone, that would make me hate him for that, even Zuko couldn't contain his anger of something like that happens. I'm glad I'm reading this after it is complete, I would be suffering for that cliffhanger! But I must thank you for this amazing story.

Si everything for nothing! I'm angry that she is not there! I was convinced she was there for a moment until the hairpin appeared, maybe holding that letter for Zuko that long could have affected this mission, maybe she was there and she was taken to another place, that is sad and gets me angry, but the story is going really good, exciting too I was really surprised that they didn't find her, it was too easy; maybe with this mission they will have some clue to where she is now.

I don't know why Chem hates Zuko so much? Is like he only see Ozai in him, not even a little bit of Ursa, well this was like the calm before the storm and now how this will end? What if Ursa is not there? Where else she could be?

The morning after, it was fun and it seem they will have a lot to do after this mission, yet I look forward them telling others they are a couple, besides it show how much they wanted this. For now I'm excited that they will moving with their plan, but what the will find is a worrying thought, and if they will be ready for it.

Wow! That was a lot if steam! I'm glad they told how they feel about each other, very intimate and passionate too. I can't say anymore but this was amazing!

This was very interesting and informative! I like the political aspect of the story and even Zuko can change everything from one day to another, even with three years he has done what he could, even with Katara's help. I'm curious about Chem, what does he intend to do to them, he is even using them to help Ursa, who would not see that action in a good way; I'm not sure if his intentions are good at least to Zuko.