There should be more of these. This was good.

This is the first HibarixHana I've read and I think if the strings in the canon were pulled a little differently it might've worked. They do have qualities in common, not to mention they would be one of the few relatively sane people/couples there. Can't tell though if Hana was a bit ooc but it was nice for her to have an actual personality. And Hibari is Hibari, enough said.
Cheers!

Ah, I love this pairing for some weird, strange, odd reason. They fit together so well, that to me, it's more like a OTP than a crack pairing. This story made a nice read; I hope you write about them again sometime In the future.

The idea of Hana & Hibari together is so interesting :)

I never thought I would be able able to find any fanfiction on this pairing. You have seriously just made my day; I love how you analyzed Hana's character.

Hana and Hibari. Gosh, crack is a drug to me now.

I love how you connected both of their personalities. Hana is very mature, respectful-at least when it matters-and quiet, but she does seem uncaring when it comes to hurting others feelings, as Hibari pointed out. Hibari likes solitude, silence and order in general, so I see how you could make them first make any sort of interaction through silence.

[She doesn't say anything, because silence is a gift she rarely gets to treasure, with Kyoko and Ryohei hounding her at every available moment.]

She does seem rather stressed sometimes by all the chaos caused by everyone, doesn't she? Not too much but it's still there.

I like how Hibari and Hana communicate with each other. She seems to know each and every meaning to Hibari's gestures and nonsensical grunts. Maybe not immediately, but she still understands him very well. Hibari also seems to know that not saying anything to Hana when she tells him her problems helps her more than giving her advice sometimes.

I also really like the title of this. I love it whenever an author refers to a character as something symbolic to that character. :) Birds and flowers are very pretty when together, are they not? They have similar traits like how Hana and Hibari do, but anyway, I'm beginning to believe that I am never going to finish this review if I keep on writing such weird things. I just really love this and I hope that my review did not seem generic or anything. I try really hard to give unique and helpful reviews although it may not seem like it. xD I am looking forward to reading more of your stories.

I absolutely loved this. I always liked both Hibari and Hana's characters, but for some reason I'd never imagined them together. And then I read this. It's like...crack gold! I'd love to see some more of the pairing from you, if you feel like writing it. _

this is interesting...i never thought hana being paired up with hibari but this is great!

Wonderful. I've never really contemplated Hana's character, though you seemed to hit it right on the nail.

First Hibari/Hana fic I've ever seen - I like it, the characterization, the flow, (the plot?), but not the pairing xD

I've never seen a Hana x Hibari fic before, but this is pretty good Great Work!