I love this story! It is written really well and I agree with how the characters are in the future and the Style is written really well.

(English is not my first language, and I'm trying to improve) : )

This was sooooo goood! I can’t say enough how much I loved this story. Like it was book/movie quality. Thanks for the good read!

Aw, I’m glad Butters was able to work through his problems. :)

2 chapters left! Ahhh I don’t want it to end. This is one of the most well thought out South Park stories I have found.

Lmfao! Fuckin’ Mint Berry Crunch on the scene. Poor Kenny.

Ooooo I love Karen’s alter ego.

Damn that chapter was super dark. I keep hoping for Butters to turn things around but I really think that by the time he comes around it will be too late. That really affected Cartman too. I want to hope Wendy is right but at this point I just don’t know.

Maaaan. When he said to follow the shadows way back in the chapter where Stan died I had a feeling he was the shadow but to be confirmed! The issue is that he is still technically following what the book says because whether Kenny likes it or not he is getting stronger and more confident because his friends now understand. In a sense the shadow is already rising.

Awww I love how pure their love seems when you wrote this chapter.

Aw, I’m glad Stan finally opened up to Kyle. I think Kyle’s reaction was pretty realistic and thoughtful. I’m glad Stan also understood that Kyle needs time to think. Great chapter.

Wow that chapter was incredibly deep. Poor Tweek, I had a bad feeling about what Chais was doing but I did not think he would be going that far. Rejection has really screwed his mind up. I kind of fear what will eventually become of him. :/

Hmmmmm I wonder why Tweak knew that tune and if that means he is either somehow tied to the cult besides what would originally be though as indirectly (Clyde). And more on Kyle’s powers... I am beginning to think that this whole thing is waaaay bigger than just the cult. Maybe there is something deeper that connects to specific characters. It must mean something. Can’t wait to read more!

Kyle’s reaction was so heartbreaking when Stan came back to life. I am glad Kenny and Henrietta were able to pull it off!

Omg this chapter was so saaaad! Home they get everything fixed soon

Awww it’s great that Kenny and Ted are together. I like that at least some of them are taking Butters seriously too. So interesting!