It may have been done to death, but yours is the one I really enjoyed! Great job! Made me very sentimental!

The bit when River sees Rory actually made me cry. I was sobbing by the end, haha. You write very well dear! Their (River and the Doctor) story is so sad and beautiful, I can't wait to September!

A bittersweet ending, just like the whole story of the Doctor and River, but absolutely beautiful. What a sad ending for Rory though, but at least he died knowing that the Doctor would always look out for his daughter and take care of her. Beautiful x

Well done and thank you for sharing.

I love this! So glad you wrote it! I loved the way River looked at Rory on her birthday while breaking into prison. I wonder what River, Rory, and Amy's relationship will be like when the show comes back...

That was beautiful, :) your a good writer.

I know this has been done to death since 'A Good Man Goes to war', but I needed this out of my head. It's the first I've seen like it, and very well done too. :D