love this story but i am curious where ganadorf has his castle

How about a sequel? Please!

(sobs) how sweet! I love this story!

You should write a story about zelda and link after married.
PleasE? You are an awesome writer and it would be cool if you included some action!

Best Fanfic I have ever read!
Wow! I love the way you established the characters and plot! I almost cried during the battle to be honest!PLease write another, you are a genius!
love-zelda rules!

Whoa...
Iv'e been reading your story for a while but this is the first reveiw I have made. May I just say...
Amazing! This chapter was sooo intense and I love everything about your story so far! Please, do go on!

So far i like it

hi

This is currently an AWSOME story! Good work!

I anticipated that Colin would be the apprentice and I'm glad to see that it did, in fact, turn out that way. Colin's character is very complex and I can't wait to see what you do with it as I continue to read.

I'm on chapter 3 and I have to say, I love the story so far! It's just fantastic, a nice, (so far) simple tale of adventure. It's fun, it takes great advantage of TP's characters, and you do a splendid job of characterizing Link. The "hero" is really just a boy and I like that your writing reminds us of that.

Also, it's nice to see a writer who doesn't turn Ilia into a horrid bitch. TP presents Ilia as a brave and thoughtful girl, NOT as a jealous brat as so many people seem to think.

There are, however, some flaws in the writing. I have caught a few proofreading errors so far as well as errors concerning sentence flow and structure. Otherwise, the writing is very clean and well done.

I will now continue on through the story. I love adventure tales, they're very fun and unique and I hope that that mood continues in the chapters that I have left to read.

-ColleenTj

Is this a Zelink story? ;)

Hope Link makes it to Zelda ASAP! Please update soon. :)

Awesome update. I have a feeling Moran isn't a good guy, and that he will return...

More please :]

Woo, glad to see an update, finally!

The writing's good as always. The descriptions are vivid, while not being too much, and work very well with the story. I'm very happy with your characterization of Colin. He's slowly maturing, and he's trying to become braver, but by the end of the day, he's still the timid boy we all know and love from Twilight Princess. And who's the source of the voice at the end of the chapter? I wanna know!

Update soon, please! :D