| Reviews for Philip and Syrena the continuing story |
|---|
RyantheSamurai chapter 1 . 8/5 "In God's sight we are all equals so you'd do well to listen to somebody other than yourself for a change." Well, looks like Philip has never read the bible or simply ignores the parts that condone genocide, slavery, rape, sexism, racism, child abuse, murder, homophobia, etc. It's not suprising though as he does only cling to religion as a means to try and do good in the world. |
PirateChamp chapter 11 . 7/13 Ok this was nice, after watching Stranger tides, I thought it was ok at best, the ending with the two was pretty vague and they could’ve expanded their love story, in which you certainly did an amazing job with. All the characters felt like they belonged in the universe, and the sex scenes were very well written. Overall 10/10 |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5 it would be awesome if you could find a way to have phillips friend marry him and serena! makes for a more awesome love story! |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/12 Beautiful story! |
Samuel Mcforland chapter 2 . 6/15/2019 I loved it great job! keep up the wonderful work |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/13/2019 This is a rly trash lemon, if its even one. You need to get into the details, along with all the lustre associated with sex. It needs to feel passionate instead of simply using the word "passionate" to describe all the encompassing emotions. |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/27/2019 OMg |
Guest chapter 11 . 1/14/2019 Awesome fanfiction |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2019 This is good. I loved it |
Kenia valle gonz chapter 1 . 10/13/2018 Buenisimo |
Kenia valle gonz chapter 1 . 10/13/2018 Alumna |
Guest chapter 11 . 9/18/2018 Shocking nobody has committed on this story and it’s well written |
Felicia Marouki chapter 11 . 7/31/2018 I love it! I've always wonderd how it would turn out for Philip and Syrena so this was really great, it was like the movie writer wrote this and I was watching it on Tv exept I was reading it and I had a image of how it look't in my head. Really great job! |
I love the Ocean chapter 11 . 7/2/2018 Can you please add more chapters to this? Oh and I review this story 10/10 |
Guest chapter 11 . 4/26/2018 You did an amazing job on this story. I was curious what happens at the end of the movie. And you finished it perfectly. Thanks so much for writing this again. |