This is a great story! But try to check your spelling corrections. Chapter 5 please?!

Y would anyone cheer for not becoming a virgin anymore. That's fu*ed up

great story. few grammatical errors, but overall the main plot and how it was written was excellent. :3

Yay! woot woot! Usagi-san to the rescue! xD lol i cn be so random and weird sometimes. Anyways, i really like this story so pls continue to update! UPDATE ASAP! PLS PLS PLS!

Hahahaha! xD OMFG You wont believ how f**kin much im laughing at the moment! I probably look lik im crazy xPP

Please continue writing this soon! I love it so much, and I love a sexy Misaki lol XD

haha a beta is basically an editor, they correct the grammer/punctuation and other misakes in your stories and they can help discuss things with you to make the plot stronger or if you put in something that could be better. I like your story, its interesting.

more~!

wow misaki lost his first time to usagi and just found out that usagi is takahiro's friend.i cant belive misaki had such a sexysdie to him is shocked to know the one he slept was with was his crush's brother omg! i feel sorry for misaki he had to get that job becuse his brother couldnt ake enough making them risk their stay at their place being unable to payt the rent. and wow msiaki being so cute and sexy and all catching the attention of the silent monster, usagi. wow misaki is so attractive that his landlord wanted to see him act sexy in front of him to exchange for rent. man was he horny when he wanted to sleep with misaki cause he was way too beautiful, feel sorry for misaki for his unbearble beauty attracting unwanted attention. and then there is uagi wow what did he think when he saw misaki in those clothes and in tht position? then there is also the wife of the bastard owner. although he tried to cheat on her, she still loved him. love conquers all and that means she doesnt care what he does cause she really loves him nonetheless. then there is misaki, he is so nice to not call the cops on him. i mean he was like kinda raped in a sense, doing something against his will and by force by verbal abbuse. then there is takahiro, is he is so dense wabout what is going happen in misaki's life? misaki is being so brave doing such a dangerous job to support the both of them and realtionship between usagi? well id ont know what is going to happen from now on but i hope there will be a hppy ending for everyone. i really enjoyed it so far and i really cant wait fore more.. keep upi the awesomess!

Nice chapter. Update soon please.

AMAZING! Go dominant Usagi-san! XD (insert fangirl scream)

this is really good keep it up your doing a good job

How dare that bugger try to touch Misaki! He's a nasty ol sleeze bag that needs to die! I don't understand why that woman loves him.

Oooooooh Misaki's in trouble. You have now been claimed by Usagi and you will never escape. Now if only we could get rid of that pesky problem with the money issue. Does Minami have money? Cause Misaki's right, Takahiro has no way of supporting her. Well, he'll probably be moving out soon so I guess that will make for some extra cash.

Hmmm. . . Okay well I loved it! I can't wait for more! This is one of my favorite stories!

Live Long And Prosper!

Urrrmmmm that was really fast. Not really bad, just fast, like you didn't want to wait, and you wanted to get it out as soon as possible. It's just that, I could see Misaki being in love with Usagi right away, but then all that other stuff, with the whole, Misaki stripping and all of a sudden about to get shot, and Manami being a fan girl, it was really fast, is all.

That kimono scene seems familiar...